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根據(jù)中文提示和英文提示詞語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60個(gè)詞的短文。英文提示詞語(yǔ)供選用。

75、暑假即將來(lái)臨。你班同學(xué)們正在討論假期計(jì)劃，提出了不同的看法。有的想和家人外出旅游，有的想和同學(xué)一起打球。你有什么看法呢？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)你自己的實(shí)際情況談?wù)勀愕拇蛩愫拖敕ā?/P>

提示詞語(yǔ)：the summer holiday, come, your classmates, talk about, travel, play, think, do

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One possible version： 　　The summer holiday is coming．Your classmates are talking about what to do during the holiday． 　　Some are going out for travelling with their families．Of course they will spend more money．Some are going to play ball games with their classmates．Though it's good for health, it's not my favourite． 　　I think it's much better to stay at home．I can do many things as I like, such as reading, watching TV and helping my parents with the housework．In this way I can not only increase my knowledge but also do something for my parents． 　　書(shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)： 　　第一檔：(15～13分) 　　完全符合題目要求，觀點(diǎn)正確, 要點(diǎn)齊全。句式多樣，詞匯豐富。語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)意連貫，表達(dá)清楚，具有邏輯性。 　　第二檔：(12～9分) 　　基本符合題目要求，觀點(diǎn)正確, 要點(diǎn)齊全。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯基本滿足文章需要。語(yǔ)言基本通順，語(yǔ)意基本連貫，表達(dá)基本清楚。雖然有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，但不影響整體理解。 　　第三檔：(8～5分) 　　部分內(nèi)容符合題目要求，要點(diǎn)不齊全。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯錯(cuò)誤較多，語(yǔ)言不通順，表達(dá)不夠清楚，影響整體理解。 　　第四檔：(4～0分) 　　與題目有關(guān)內(nèi)容不多，只是簡(jiǎn)單拼湊提示詞語(yǔ)，所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容難以理解。