Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。（10分）

人人都有愛好，請(qǐng)你介紹一下自己的愛好是什么，它給你帶來(lái)了哪些樂(lè)趣。

要求：短文不得少于70詞；不得寫出真實(shí)姓名。

Answer 1

【答案】

My hobby

Everyone has his own hobby，it may give us a lot of happiness.For example，build model ships，play basketball，raise pets and so on.Then what’s my hobby？My hobby is listening to music.

When I was a child I enjoy listening to music especially the cartoon music. Though I’m not good at it，I often lose myself in it.When I am in trouble，music can make me calm down.When I am very tired，it can make me comfortable. When I am angry with something，it also can make me happy again. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it’s good for my health.

Do you like listening to musici？If not，I hope you can have a try，you’ll find it so good.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)所給信息，來(lái)介紹一下自己的愛好的文章。本文以聽音樂(lè)為自己的愛好，介紹聽音樂(lè)的好處。能夠清楚地表述自己的觀點(diǎn)和想法，寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意要用正確的格式去寫，會(huì)用一些短語(yǔ)，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，以第一人稱來(lái)敘述。。當(dāng)然我們要盡量使用一些好的句型和連詞，使文章上下文意思連貫，更出彩。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者按照題目的要求，短文用了排比句，為文章增色不少，如：When I am in trouble，music can make me calm down.When I am very tired，it can make me comfortable. When I am angry with something，it also can make me happy again.，而且作者還使用了一些較好的句式，增強(qiáng)了文章的連貫性。