Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（滿分15分）

假設(shè)你們班在畢業(yè)前夕討論填報(bào)高中志愿問(wèn)題，基本上有兩種觀點(diǎn)，有點(diǎn)同學(xué)認(rèn)為在本地就讀高中比在外地就讀高中有利，但有的同學(xué)認(rèn)為在外地比在本地有利，他們的觀點(diǎn)如下：假設(shè)你是李明，九年級(jí)三班學(xué)生，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下的信息寫一篇報(bào)道。

	有利因素	不利因素
本地就讀	1.便利 2.費(fèi)用少	1.周圍有很多同學(xué)，容易結(jié)伴 2.上網(wǎng) 3不利于獨(dú)立.
外地就讀	1.條件好 2.易獨(dú)立	1.費(fèi)用高 2.往返時(shí)間長(zhǎng)，生活不便

提示詞：study in our city., study out of our city, convenient, be independent (獨(dú)立), good condition

Dear Editor:

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Yours,

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

I’m a student in Class One , Crade Three . In the class meeting we had a discussion about which senior high school we’d beter enter , the schools in or out of our city .

Some students think it’s convenient to study in our city while studying out of our city costs lots of money and wastes much time on the way.

Other students think that the schools out of our city may have good conditions and it’s helpful for students to learn to be independent. Besides, without so many old classmates around, they would have less chance to play or go to the net bars together.

The discussion was very heated.I think studying in or out of our city has some advantages and disadvantages. As for me, I prefer studying in my own city.

Yours ,

Li Ming

【解析】

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