Question

【題目】寫作

假設(shè)你是李華，上個(gè)暑假你和家人來到北京游玩，根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，給你的朋友Mary寫一封電子郵件，向她介紹你游覽北京的經(jīng)歷及游玩的感受。

內(nèi)容如下：

1.北京在中國(guó)的北方，是中國(guó)的首都，有很多名勝古跡，每年有很多人到北京旅游。

2.你已經(jīng)來過北京多次，做過了很多事情。你爬過長(zhǎng)城，到過頤和園但沒有參觀故宮。

3.你看了京��；吃了北京烤鴨；拜訪了北京的朋友；在北京買過很多禮物。

4.你拍了很多照片，與外國(guó)人用英語交談過。

5.雖然很累，但是很開心。

參考詞匯：in the north of...，places of interest，climb the Great Wall，visit the Summer Palace，the Palace Museum，see the Beijing Opera，eat Beijign duck，take photos，comunicate with...

要求：1. 短文應(yīng)包括所給要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展，70詞左右；

2. 根據(jù)提示選擇恰當(dāng)時(shí)態(tài)；

3.開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好（見答題卡）。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mary,

Last summer holiday, I went on a trip to Beijing with my family.

Beijing is the capital of China and it is in the north of China. There are many places of interest there. A lot of people come to visit Beijing every year. I have been to Beijing many times. I have done many things there. For example, I have climbed the Great Wall. I have visited the Summer Palace but I haven’t visited the Palace Museum. I have also seen the Beijing opera and eaten Beijing duck. I have visited my friends in Beijing and I have had some presents for my friends. I have also had conversations with foreigners and I have taken lots of photos. I felt tired but very happy. It was an interesting experience. I had a good time there.

What about your last summer holiday?

Best wishes!

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇關(guān)于作者和家人來北京游玩的經(jīng)歷和感受的文章，是一封書信的形式。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可能會(huì)用到過去時(shí)態(tài)（used to do 過去常常）和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。根據(jù)所給材料信息，用準(zhǔn)確的語言表達(dá)出來，不能有語法錯(cuò)誤。根據(jù)提綱要求進(jìn)行描述就可以了。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文要點(diǎn)敘述全，幾乎沒有語言錯(cuò)誤，句式變化靈活。語言豐富。