Question

【題目】親愛(ài)的同學(xué)們，不知不覺(jué)中，你已跨入初中的校門半個(gè)學(xué)期了，新的學(xué)校，新的教室，新的同學(xué)，相信你都有所了解了吧？請(qǐng)你寫一篇題為“I love my school and my classroom”，介紹你的學(xué)校和你的教室。

要求:

1.請(qǐng)根據(jù)你學(xué)校和班級(jí)的實(shí)際情況來(lái)描述

2.不得出現(xiàn)本人的真實(shí)姓名。

3.字?jǐn)?shù)60詞左右。

4.運(yùn)用there be 句型。

關(guān)鍵詞: classroom building, office building, science building, dining hall

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Answer 1

【答案】I love my school and my classroom

My school is not big, but it is very clean. On the right at the gate is the office building and behind this is the classroom building. Behind the classroom building is the library.The science building is between the dining hall and the sports hall.And behind the dining hall,between the playground and the library there are trees.

My classroom is nice and big. There are forty desks and chairs in the classroom. There are two black boards on the walls. And there are two pictures, too. My classroom has eleven lights and twelve fans. What colour are the fans ? They are blue. At the corner, there is a shelf, and many books are in the shelf. I like the books very much.

I love my school and my classroom very much.

【解析】

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如on the right，at the gate，behind the classroom building，between and，the dining hall，nice and big，on the walls，at the corner，very much等。而并列句My school is not big, but it is very clean./ On the right at the gate is the office building and behind this is the classroom building.和多種there be結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。