Question

13．Write a short passage at least 60words according to the given information．（根據(jù)所給信息寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格．）
（注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)任何姓名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分．）
Last month thousands of dead pigs appeared on the Huang Pu River．People were very upset about the event．What do you think？（上個(gè)月黃浦江水域出現(xiàn)大量死豬．人們對此事很焦慮．請你就這個(gè)事情談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ��?br />That the increasing number of dead pigs has been collected fromShanghai'sHuangpuRiversurprised me recently．There's no doubt thateveryone shoulddevelop good habitsto protectthe environment．First of all，we cannot throw litter about/around because it will influence others，and what's worse，mess the ground．Additionally，taking bus to school instead of taking a private car is also a good choice．It's common knowledge thatoil resource is very precious nowadays．There'remanymore things we can do．As a teenager，please try your best to protect our earth，like loving our mother．Believe it or not，our life will be more colorful and meaningful，won't it？．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
①There's no doubt that everyone should develop good habits②to protect the environment毫無疑問每個(gè)人應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣去保護(hù)環(huán)境．
①There's no doubt that 從句：毫無疑問…
②動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語．
【高分句型二】
There're many more things we can do．有很多我們能做的事情．
we can do是定語從句，修飾先行詞things，關(guān)系詞that作為從句賓語，故省略．

解答 That the increasing number of dead pigs has been collected from Shanghai's Huangpu River surprised me recently．（狀況）There's no doubt that everyone should develop good habits to protect the environment．【高分句型一】（看法）First of all，we cannot throw litter about because it will influence others，and what's worse，mess the ground．Additionally，taking bus to school instead of taking a private car is also a good choice．It's common knowledge that oil resource is very precious nowadays．There're many more things we can do【高分句型二】．As a teenager，please try your best to protect our earth，like loving our mother．
（建議） Believe it or not，our life will be more colorful and meaningful，won't it？

點(diǎn)評 作文出題非常新穎，把著眼點(diǎn)放在了實(shí)事上，體現(xiàn)出中考作文不再局限于應(yīng)試，而是更加關(guān)注身邊發(fā)生的事情．同時(shí)，環(huán)境也是一個(gè)大家比較熟悉的話題，這也是出題人希望學(xué)生通過把自己熟悉的話題作文表達(dá)使用在身邊實(shí)事上，做到學(xué)以致用的思想．