Question

【題目】以My hometown為題寫一篇80詞左右的文章，包含下列要點，語句通順。

1.	和父母住在揚州市中心的一棟大樓中，一共14層，你們住在第9層；
2.	很喜歡住在這兒，樹多、花草美，這兒的鄰居們也很善良友好；
3.	志愿者們經(jīng)常周末在社區(qū)中心會面，幫助人們解決各種麻煩；(舉例) …… …… ……
4.	能住在這樣的社區(qū)我們真的都很幸運

Answer 1

【答案】

My hometown

Yangzhou is my hometown. It is a beautiful city. I live in a tall building in the center of the city with my parents. There are 14 floors in this building. We live on the ninth floor. I like living here, there are many trees around here. The flowers and grass are very beautiful, and the neighbors are also very kind and friendly.

Volunteers often meet at the community center on weekends to help people solve all kinds of problems, like mending their televisions or computers, telling stories for old people and so on. To live in such a good community, we are really very lucky.

【解析】

試題分析：本題是寫一篇給定材料的書面表達(dá)，主要介紹作者的家鄉(xiāng)---揚州，介紹作者家鄉(xiāng)的美，家鄉(xiāng)的社區(qū)，和家鄉(xiāng)鄰居的友好與善良，在寫作時應(yīng)注意語言的準(zhǔn)確性和連貫性。不要逐字的去翻譯。

寫作亮點：這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者按照題目的要求，介紹了作者家鄉(xiāng)的美麗，短文用了很多精彩的句型，如The flowers and grass are very beautiful, and the neighbors are also very kind and friendly.

給文章增色不少。最后一句寫出了自己對家鄉(xiāng)由衷的熱愛。To live in such a good community, we are really very lucky.