Question

【題目】寫作

請根據(jù)提示寫一篇題為“My Favourite Film Star”的短文，詞數(shù)90左右。

1、 我最喜歡的電影明星是Peter，他是一名著名的影星，他不僅年輕而且……

2、 2015年， Peter在一部恐怖片中扮演了一名偵探。這名偵探通過查看現(xiàn)場……并最終抓住了殺人犯。

3、 由于Peter在這部影片中擔任了重要角色且演得十分精彩，他榮獲了奧斯卡最佳男演員獎(the Oscar for Best Actor)。

4、 由于他的努力…… （用2—3句話展開合理想象）

Answer 1

【答案】

My Favourite Film Star

Peter is my favourite film star . He is very famous . He is not only young but also handsome . He is very popular among fans. In 2015 ， Peter played the role of a detective in a horror film . In the film ， the detective checked the scene ，asked the neighbours some questions and found the clues. At last he caught the murderer . Because Peter played an important role and played wonderfully ， he won an Oscar for Best Actor . He is famous around the world because of his efforts. He also helps many children in poor areas， he is great.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者介紹自己最喜愛的電影明星。小作者首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

寫作亮點：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如In the film ， the detective checked the scene ，asked the neighbours some questions and found the clues. At last he caught the murderer . Because Peter played an important role and played wonderfully ， he won an Oscar for Best Actor .等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。