Question

【題目】書面表達

假如你叫李華，你的美國筆友Peter發(fā)來電子郵件詢問你上個周末的活動情況。請你根據(jù)以下要點給他寫一封回信。

1．周六和父母一起看望爺爺奶奶，并幫他們打掃房子；

2．周日上午去了歷史博物館，學(xué)到了很多東西；

3．周日下午在家看書做作業(yè)。

4、晚上幫媽媽做晚飯，飯后與父母一起看電視。

要求：

1．文中必須包括上面所有信息，可適當發(fā)揮；

2．語法正確，條理清晰，字跡工整，書寫規(guī)范。

3．60詞左右。開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計人字數(shù)。

Dear Peter,

I’m very happy to tell you about my last weekend．___________________________

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How was your last weekend? Could you please tell me?

Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear Peter,

I’m very happy to tell you about my last weekend. I went to visit my grandparents with my parents on Saturday. I helped them clean the house. In the evening we had a big meal together. On Sunday morning, I went to the history museum with my friends. We learned a lot there. In the afternoon, I read books and did my homework at home. In the evening, I helped my mother with the super. The food was very delicious. After super, I watched TV with my parents. What a happy weekend I had!

How was your last weekend? Could you please tell me?

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，李華給筆友彼得發(fā)電子郵件，介紹自己上個周末的活動。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過去時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I’m very happy to...， I went to...，We learned...， I helped my mother...，The food was...，How was...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。按照提綱要求，完整地表達出提綱中的內(nèi)容。

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了寫電子郵件的目的，要介紹自己上個周末的活動，接下來介紹上周六和上周日兩天我所做的活動：看望爺爺奶奶，并幫他們打掃房子；參觀歷史博物館；看書做作業(yè)；幫媽媽做晚飯，看電視。最后詢問彼得他上周末怎么樣。此處be happy to do sth, tell sb about sth, help sb do sth, a lot, do one’s homework, watch TV等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。