Question

4．某英文報(bào)以An Unforgettable Day （《難忘的一天》） 為題，面向中學(xué)生開(kāi)展征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文參加此次活動(dòng)．
內(nèi)容包括：
1哪一天讓你感到難忘；
2什么事（開(kāi)心的、傷心的或是有特別意義的，…）讓你感到那天難忘；
3那一天你經(jīng)歷了什么；
4那天的經(jīng)歷對(duì)你有什么影響或者你有什么感受．
要求：80-100 詞；文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及校名．
An Unforgettable Day
I'll never forget June 11^th，2012．
It was a sunnyday．On the way to school，my friend did something rude to me．It made me sad．What's worse，I got a"C"in my favorite subject．
After school，I went home unhappily．It was dark in the room．Suddenly the lights were on，and I heard the song"Happy birthday"．I was surprised to see many people and a big cake．"Oh，it's my birthday．"I was so excited and happy．It was my first time to have a birthday party．
I'll never forget that day．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，要求根據(jù)自己的回憶寫(xiě)一篇敘事性短文，記述自己難忘的一天和一件事情．動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀寫(xiě)作提示，注意從四個(gè)方面進(jìn)行敘述．1哪一天讓你感到難忘；
2什么事（開(kāi)心的、傷心的或是有特別意義的，…）讓你感到那天難忘；
3那一天你經(jīng)歷了什么；
4那天的經(jīng)歷對(duì)你有什么影響或者你有什么感受
由于是回憶性短文，故用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)較多，主要用第一人稱(chēng)．
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)和句型：
on the way to去某地的路上
what's worse更糟糕的是
it is the first time to do sth第一次去做某事

解答 答案：
An Unforgettable Day
I'll never forget June 11^th，2012．（難忘的那一天）
It was a sunny day．On the way to school，my friend did something rude to me．It made me sad．What's worse，I got a"C"in my favorite subject（高分句型）．After school，I went home unhappily．It was dark in the room．Suddenly the lights were on，and I heard the song"Happy birthday"．I was surprised to see many people and a big cake．"Oh，it's my birthday．"（難忘的事情和經(jīng)歷）I was so excited and happy．It was my first time to have a birthday party（高分句型）．（影響和感受）
I'll never forget that day．（總結(jié)全文，點(diǎn)題）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是考查書(shū)面表達(dá)能力，在平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)中要加強(qiáng)寫(xiě)作的訓(xùn)練，達(dá)到熟練運(yùn)用的目的，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，語(yǔ)法準(zhǔn)確，過(guò)渡自然連貫．寫(xiě)作中選取自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容寫(xiě)，注意適當(dāng)使用連詞，序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不要犯語(yǔ)法書(shū)寫(xiě)的低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤．