Question

【題目】假如你是高三學生李華，你的好朋友Nancy在你校的友好學校美國圣西諾高中讀十二年級。 你們常互通郵件，最近你們剛談論過“中國夢”這個話題。畢業(yè)在即，她來信問你的夢想，請給她寫封回信。主要內(nèi)容包括：

1 對夢想的理解；

2 你的人生夢想；

3 如何實現(xiàn)你的夢想。

注意：

1 詞數(shù)100左右；

2 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Nancy,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Nancy,

I am writing to share you my dream.

Our homeland dreams to restore the former glory, which inspires me to recall my dream — to become a doctor, saving lives and shouldering a burden of low-expense medical treatment for distant poor villagers.

Being a motivation and goal, dreams make us determined, diligent and devoted as well as making life more meaningful. However, it is quite plain that obstacles cast a fierce eye on me alongside. Therefore, giving full play to strengths and minimizing weaknesses in current preparation for the entrance exam is my first challenge I am to face consciously. Also, I am fully convinced that sparing no efforts to offer toil and sweat firmly and consistently will contributes a lot.

I am in curiosity about yours and reply to me soon, please.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】寫作背景：李華的好朋友Nancy在友好學校美國圣西諾高中讀十二年級，你們�；ネㄠ]件，最近你們剛談論過“中國夢”這個話題。畢業(yè)在即，她來信問你的夢想，請給她寫封回信。文章主要用現(xiàn)在時來寫，以第三人稱和第一人稱為主。主要分三部分：先介紹自己的夢想是什么；然后寫對夢想的理解和如何實現(xiàn)你的夢想；最后寫希望知道對方的夢想，盡快回信。

寫作時要觀點明確，條理清楚，要點全面，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。還要盡可能多使用高級詞匯和句型增加文章的亮點。如定語從句which inspires me to recall my dream,主語從句that obstacles cast a fierce eye on me alongside.賓語從句that sparing no efforts to offer toil and sweat firmly and consistently will contributes a lot.非謂語動詞saving lives and shouldering a burden和Being a motivation and goal,及giving full play to strengths and minimizing weaknesses.詞語restore the former glory, cast a fierce eye on, sparing no efforts to等。