Question

5．假如你的鄰居李濤即將升入初中，他很想了解一下初中的學(xué)習(xí)和生活，請(qǐng)你寫一篇英語短文告訴他相關(guān)情況，文章要包括以下提示內(nèi)容并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，首句已給出．詞數(shù)：80-100詞左右．
提示：1、學(xué)習(xí)方法上的建議
2、與老師同學(xué)融洽相處
3、與父母之間理解溝通．
I'm glad to share something with you．I think it's the most important to listen to the teachers carefully in class．It's not necessary to do too many exercises．We should try to find the right method to solve them．We can collect the problems we haven't worked out correctly．Go over them at times．The harder you work，the better grades you will get．
We should get on well with our teachers and class to keep us happy．Try to be more active and help each other．We'd better not argue with our parents when we're in disagreement．Have a talk with them．We should help them do housework after school．Don't spend too much time on the Internet．It's not good for our health．Good luck!．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是寫信告訴你的鄰居你的初中的學(xué)習(xí)和生活，注意信件的格式．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1、學(xué)習(xí)方法上的建議
2、與老師同學(xué)融洽相處
3、與父母之間理解溝通．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
try to do sth盡力做某事
work out 解答出
go over 復(fù)習(xí)
get on with sb 與某人相處
had better do sth 最好做某事
spend+時(shí)間+on sth花時(shí)間做某事
be good for 對(duì)…有益
【高分句型】
1．We can collect the problems①we haven't②worked out correctly．
①定語從句，先行詞是problems，關(guān)系詞是which/that，做從句的賓語省略．
2．The harder you work，the better grades you will get．
the+比較級(jí)，the+比較級(jí)，表示越…，就越…．是一個(gè)復(fù)合句，其中前面的句子是狀語從句，后面的句子是主句．

解答 I'm glad to share something with you． I think it's the most important to listen to the teachers carefully in class．It's not necessary to do too many exercises．We should try to find the right method to solve them．We can collect the problems we haven't worked out correctly．【高分句型】Go over them at times．The harder you work，the better grades you will get．【高分句型】（學(xué)習(xí)方法上的建議）
We should get on well with our teachers and class to keep us happy．Try to be more active and help each other．（與老師同學(xué)融洽相處）We'd better not argue with our parents when we're in disagreement．Have a talk with them．We should help them do housework after school．（與父母之間理解溝通）Don't spend too much time on the Internet．It's not good for our health．Good luck!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文是一項(xiàng)能夠充分考查學(xué)生語言綜合運(yùn)用能力的題型．主要考查學(xué)生運(yùn)用已學(xué)的語言基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)和已掌握的英語寫作技能準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)客觀事實(shí)，闡述個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，進(jìn)行思想交流的書面表達(dá)能力．為了提高書面表達(dá)水平，平時(shí)應(yīng)加強(qiáng)閱讀，應(yīng)背誦一些句型、段落、甚至短文．只要讀得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下筆成文．此外，還要了解英文寫作方面的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，掌握常用文體的寫作方法．其實(shí)，用英文寫信，記日記等都是學(xué)生力所能及且行之有效的練習(xí)寫作的好方法．