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3．你校與英國(guó)某中學(xué)結(jié)成姊妹學(xué)校，英方校刊編輯（Ann）來(lái)信了解你校的課外活動(dòng)情況及你們的建議，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提供的內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫一篇80詞左右的短文，（文章的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
生詞：興趣小組 interest group   活動(dòng) activity
活動(dòng)時(shí)間：4：50-5：50
主要內(nèi)容：（1）體育類：籃球、足球；
（2）興趣小組活動(dòng)：繪畫 歌舞 電腦等；
（3）英語(yǔ)角 （周三下午）．
建議：（1）增加課外活動(dòng)時(shí)間；
（2）減少作業(yè)量．
Dear Ann，
I'like to tell you something about the out-of-class activity in our school．We usuallyhave activities from 4：50-5：50 in the afternoon．We have different kinds of activities．Some students are interested in sports．They play basketball and football．We also have some special interest groups，such as drawing，singing and dancing．And now，The computer games are the most popular．On Wednesday afternoon we go to English Corner．We like speaking English there．We hope to spend more time on such activities and less time on homework．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是向英國(guó)某中學(xué)介紹你校的課外活動(dòng)情況及你們的建議．注意信的格式．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1活動(dòng)時(shí)間：4：50-5：50
2主要內(nèi)容：（1）體育類：籃球、足球；
（2）興趣小組活動(dòng)：繪畫 歌舞 電腦等；
（3）英語(yǔ)角 （周三下午）．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
different kinds of不同種類
such as 例如
be interested in對(duì)…感興趣
like doing sth 喜歡做某事
hope to do sth 希望去做某事
spend+時(shí)間+on sth花時(shí)間做某事
【高分句型】
1．And now，the computer games are the most popular．
最高級(jí)的運(yùn)用．
2．We ①hope to ②spend more time on such activities and less time on homework．
①hope to do sth 希望去做某事
②spend+時(shí)間+on sth花時(shí)間做某事

解答 Dear Ann，
I'like to tell you something about the out-of-class activity in our school．We usually have activities from 4：50-5：50 in the afternoon．（活動(dòng)時(shí)間）We have different kinds of activities．Some students are interested in sports．They play basketball and football．（體育類）We also have some special interest groups，such as drawing，singing and dancing．And now，the computer games are the most popular．【高分句型】（興趣小組活動(dòng)）On Wednesday afternoon we go to English Corner．We like speaking English there．（英語(yǔ)角）We hope to spend more time on such activities and less time on homework．【高分句型】（建議）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)．寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤．注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫．
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多．寫作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯．