Question

【題目】書面表達

Jack跟Bruce談到他跟父母關(guān)系不好，并向Bruce尋求幫助。假設(shè)你是Bruce．請根據(jù)下面的提示，給Jack回復(fù)信息。

現(xiàn)象	我過去經(jīng)常和父母吵架，有時候幾天不說話……
原因	父母過分擔(dān)心我的成績，給我的壓力太大。我不幫助父母做家務(wù)，也沒有意識到幫助父母的重要性，反而，一天花兩個小時玩電腦……
措施	我現(xiàn)在和父母相處得很好，我認為我們應(yīng)當(dāng)和父母溝通……

要求：

1．表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；

2．必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，可作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮（至少兩點）；

3．不得使用真實姓名和班名等。

4.詞數(shù)：80詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；

Jack, don't worry ! I didn't get on well with my parents, either.

Answer 1

【答案】

Jack, don't worry ! I didn't get on well with my parents, either. In the past,I used to quarrel with their parents, Sometimes I didn’t speak to them for a few days. One day ,my parents talked withme for a long time and I knew my parents love me deeply. Because my parents was too worried about my schoolwork, they gave me too much pressure， I felt they were too strict and boring. On the otherhand , I didn't help my parents do any housework, and I never realized the importance of helping parents. Instead I spend at least two hours a day playing computer . so they were not pleased with me. After the communication, we understand each other better.Now I can get along well with my parents. I think you should communicate with your parents and you can get on well with each other.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇表格作文。首先要審清題目要求：主要是Bruce通過自己的經(jīng)歷來給杰克建議。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知主要用到過去時態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時。

寫作亮點：這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運用恰當(dāng)。這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色.如:學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié), used to，On the other hand，the importance of helpingparents，get on well with，pleased with牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。