Question

7．學(xué)校英語角將于本周末舉行以"How to relax ourselves after the exam"為主題的
討論會，請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿．內(nèi)容包括以下要點：
1．去旅游，親近大自然；
2．參加娛樂活動，比如：聽音樂、看電影…；
3．進(jìn)行體育鍛煉；
4．你的建議．
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How to relax ourselves after the exam
How to relax after the exams？We can go around and get close to nature，such as climbing mountains，going hiking，go boating and so on．We can take part in some entertainments，for example，going to the movies，listening to the music or watching street shows．We can aslo play sports like running，swimming or playing all kinds of balls．
In my opinon，we'd better go to the science museum with our parents．We can not only relax but also learn something that we couldn't learn from our textbooks．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是以"How to relax ourselves after the exam"為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．去旅游，親近大自然；
2．參加娛樂活動，比如：聽音樂、看電影…；
3．進(jìn)行體育鍛煉；
4．你的建議．
常用到的重點短語：
such as 例如
and so on 等等
take part in 參加
had better do sth 最好做某事
not only…but also…不僅…而且…
【高分句型】
1．①In my opinon，②we'd better go to the science museum with our parents．
①in one's opinion依某人看來
②had better do sth 最好做某事
2．We can①not only relax but also learn something ②that we couldn't learn from our textbooks
①not only…but also…不僅…而且…連接兩個并列成分．
②that是關(guān)系詞，作為定語從句的賓語，修飾先行詞something．

解答 How to relax ourselves after the exam
 How to relax after the exams？We can go around and get close to nature，such as climbing mountains，going hiking，go boating and so on．（去旅游，親近大自然）We can take part in some entertainments，for example，going to the movies，listening to the music or watching street shows．（參加娛樂活動）We can aslo play sports like running，swimming or playing all kinds of balls．（進(jìn)行體育鍛煉）
   In my opinon，we'd better go to the science museum with our parents．【高分句型】We can not only relax but also learn something that we couldn't learn from our textbooks【高分句型】．（我的建議）

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