Question

根據(jù)下列表格提示，以“My Favourite Shopping Mall"”為題，寫一篇80字左右的短文。要求包含表格所有內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

名稱	陽光購物中心
位置	學(xué)校附近	樓層	共4層，每層都很大
一樓	服裝店：種類多，物美價(jià)廉
二樓	書店：可以…… 禮品店：……
三樓	餐廳：來自不同國家的食物, ……
四樓	電影院：我的最愛，因?yàn)椤��?br />
我的感受	是一個(gè)好玩又可以會(huì)見朋友的好地方！

                                                                               
                                                                               

Answer 1

One possible version：
The Sunshine Shopping Mall is near my school. There are four floors and each floor is very big.
On the first floor, there are some clothes shops. There are many kinds of clothes in it. They are very cheep. Girls like them very much. There is a bookshop on the second floor, you can read books there. There is also a gift shop on it. We can buy gifts for our friends. There are many restaurant on the third floor. You can eat different kinds of food there. On the top floor, there is a cinema. We can see new films there.
The mall is an interesting place to meet friends and have fun.

試題分析：
這是一篇給材料作文，介紹陽光購物中心。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：there are……，we can......及The mall is......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)自己的感受。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了陽光購物中心的位置和樓層，接下來介紹各樓層所賣的商品種類，最后表達(dá)自己的感受。此處用了 on the second floor,  different kinds of ，have fun.等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。