Question

李梅在學(xué)習(xí)英語上遇到了困難，請以Betty的名義向她提出一些建議幫助她提高英語，內(nèi)容須包含所給要點，可適當(dāng)拓展。開頭已給出，不少于60詞。（15分）

內(nèi)容要點：

1. 讀英語報紙，聽英語廣播；

2. 看英文電影，用英語和朋友交談；

3. 訂正錯誤；

4. 參加英語俱樂部。

5. ……

Dear Li Mei,

I heard that you have some difficulties in learning English. I’d like to give you some advice.

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Yours,

Betty

 

Answer 1

Dear Li Mei,

I heard that you have some difficulties in learning English. I’d like to give you some advice.

How do you study? Everyone learns English in different ways. I think the best way to improve your English is to improve your English skills—listening, speaking, reading ,and writing. We should practice them every day. we should remember more words and grammar. Reading more English story books or novels .Watching more English cartoon TVs or movies. Listening English tapes and repeating after the speaker. Second you are not afraid to make any mistakes you speak English as much as possible. Third you ask the teachers when you don’t understand any knowledge .It’s very good for you if you are interested in English . You will find studying English is interesting and helpful. Fourth, ，you can join an English club. One more thing remember “Practice makes perfect”! I hope everyone makes progress.

Yours,

Betty

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。題目給出了文章要點。在寫作時，注意文章的結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰，不要漏掉信息點。很明顯該文章主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。寫作時要注意句子的完整性，主謂一致�？梢赃m當(dāng)使用一些連接詞，詩文章更緊湊，邏輯更清晰。

【亮點說明】這片文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰明了，寫出了題目要求的每個要點。如使用了副詞second、third、fourth使得文章非常條理。也使用了一些復(fù)合句如You will find studying English is interesting and helpful. I hope everyone makes progress.這些都為文章增色不少。

考點：話題作文。