Question

8．大多數(shù)中學生認為校園生活是豐富多彩的，學習是快樂有趣的．然而，無論在城市
還是農(nóng)村學校都有一些厭學的學生．請圍繞該話題用英語談談你的看法．
要求：（1）內(nèi)容包括：
①中學生厭學的主要原因．
②你對該現(xiàn)象的看法．
（2）字數(shù)：60-80詞．
（3）短文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名、學校名和地名．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是針對一些厭學學生談談看法．時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第三人稱和第二人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．其次考生可從兩方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：①中學生厭學的主要原因．
②你對該現(xiàn)象的看法
常用到的重點句型和短語：
be interested in對…感興趣
give up 放棄
it's adj to do…做某事是…
be afraid of 害怕…
 It's a good idea to do sth 做某事是個好主意
besides另外
in one's opinion依某人看來
參考句子：
Some students think it's not necessary to learn too much knowledge because their parents will give them everything they need．一些學生認為沒必要去學太多的知識因為他們的父母會給他們一切他們需要的．
本句含有賓語從句，because引導的時間狀語從句，以及they need定語從句．還有it's adj to do…做某事是…的運用．
Besides，some even think what is tought in class is boring．（高分句型）另外．一些學生甚至認為課堂上所教的是無聊的．
besides承接上下文，還有賓語從句，以及主語從句what is tought in class的運用．
Try to find out your interests and talents which can make you more confident．盡力去發(fā)現(xiàn)你感興趣的你擅長的，這些能讓你更有自信．
which can make you more confident定語從句的運用．

解答 Most middle school students think school life is interesting and pleasant，but some students don't like to go to school，and they are not interested in their studies．（點題）
The reasons are as follows：Some students think it's not necessary to learn too much knowledge because their parents will give them everything they need．（高分句型） Some have given up their studies because of one or two poor subjects．They are afraid of being laughed at．Besides，some even think what is tought in class is boring．（高分句型）（厭學原因）
In my opinion，getting an education can help you build the kind of future life you want．It's a good idea to talk to your teachers，parents or friends about your problems with school．You may get some useful advice from them．Try to find out your interests and talents which can make you more confident．（高分句型） You should remember that knowledge is power and that you must depend on yourself in the future．（我的看法和建議）

點評 這是一篇給材料作文．題目中給出的材料較為簡略，動筆前應認真閱讀要點，根據(jù)要點組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容．寫作中做注意結(jié)合自己實際，認真談談中學生的厭學原因，這部分重點寫，然后談談自己對這個問題的看法．注意不要遺漏要點，適當發(fā)揮．結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是第三人稱，時態(tài)一般應該用一般現(xiàn)在時．注意情態(tài)動詞should后面動詞用原形．適當使用連詞，序數(shù)詞，注意從句的應用，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．