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1．My Plan for the Coming School Year
提示：難忘的初中生活即將結(jié)束，請以"My Plan for the Coming School Year"為題，用英語寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀愠踔薪Y(jié)束后一學(xué)年內(nèi)的打算．
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My Plan for the Coming School Year
New year school is coming．All things have changed，but one thing have never forgotten，which is studying studying studying．Next term，I will go to the senior school．So I must do well in the entrance exam of senior school．As these reasons，I plan a design for my study．First，I will never waste my time again．You know Franklin said，"Never leave that until tomorrow，which you can do today．"．I will do it as these words of Franklin．
Second，I will ask more questions which is a puzzle for me．Because of these things can let me understand all of knowledge in book very well．
Third，I will do more exercises．Such as，English．maths，Chinese and so on．
In a word，time is important，we should cherish the time．So action is only one thing I can do!．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇以My Plan for the Coming School Year為題目的作文，主要圍繞新學(xué)年的學(xué)習(xí)計劃展開寫作，寫作重點就是把計劃說清楚，可以利用序數(shù)詞分條進行列舉；作文中要以一般將來時為主．因為是"我的計劃"，所以人稱應(yīng)該用第一人稱I；作文要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)要正確； 上下文要連貫以及語言要得體．還要注意拼寫和標點符號．
所用到的重點詞匯及重點短語和句子有：do well in；first，second，third；in a word；the entrance exam of senior school；Never leave that until tomorrow，which you can do today；Such as；cherish等．

解答 參考例文：
My Plan for the Coming School Year
New year school is coming．All things have changed，but one thing have never forgotten，which is studying studying studying．Next term，I will go to the senior school．So I must do well in the entrance exam of senior school．As these reasons，I plan a design for my study．【總起】
Firstly，I will never waste my time again．You know Franklin said，"Never leave that until tomorrow，which you can do today．"．I will do it as these words of Franklin．
Secondly，I will ask more questions which is a puzzle for me．Because of these things can let me understand all of knowledge in book very well．
Thirdly，I will do more exercises．Such as，English．maths，Chinese and so on．【分條列舉計劃】
In a word，time is important，we should cherish the time．So action is only one thing I can do!【總結(jié)全文】

點評 這是一篇提綱類作文．作文前要仔細審題，確定出寫作重點；要把握好時態(tài)和人稱；為使文章更有條理性可以分條列出計劃．為避免文章的單調(diào)和枯燥．應(yīng)該考慮運用比較高級的語法形式去讓文章增色，如定語從句的使用和名人名言等．所以平時的基礎(chǔ)一定要打牢，這樣寫起文章來才游刃有余，而不是捉襟見肘．