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14．請(qǐng)從90后初中生的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)兩個(gè)方面進(jìn)行客觀的描述，然后制定個(gè)人將來(lái)的目標(biāo)和計(jì)劃．

優(yōu)點(diǎn)	缺點(diǎn)	目標(biāo)和計(jì)劃
1．當(dāng)別人遇到麻煩時(shí)經(jīng)常樂(lè)于助人； 2．活躍，對(duì)新鮮的事物感興趣； 3．喜歡做事與眾不同．	1．易激動(dòng)、發(fā)怒； 2．因粗心而常犯同樣的錯(cuò)誤； 3．有時(shí)只考慮自己的感受．	1．理想是成為…； 2．我已努力…； 3．我相信…．

具體要求：
1．目標(biāo)和計(jì)劃需用3句話展開(kāi)合理想象并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
2．語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，字跡工整．
3．開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，80詞左右．
As post-90students，we                           ．

Answer 1

分析 本題是一篇圖表作文，應(yīng)注意以下幾個(gè)方面：內(nèi)容主要包括三個(gè)方面-初中生的優(yōu)點(diǎn)、缺點(diǎn)和個(gè)人將來(lái)目標(biāo)及計(jì)劃，每一方面按照?qǐng)D表進(jìn)行闡述，注意題目要求目標(biāo)和計(jì)劃需用3句話闡述；2．作文在描述優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)時(shí)可用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述個(gè)人將來(lái)目標(biāo)和計(jì)劃時(shí)可用一般將來(lái)時(shí)；3．人稱(chēng)以第一人稱(chēng)為主.4．詞數(shù)是80詞左右．
寫(xiě)作常用短語(yǔ)句型：
be willing to do sth．愿意做某事
in trouble 遇到麻煩
be intersted in sth．對(duì)某事感興趣
However，it is easy for us to get excited or angry．然而，我們很容易激動(dòng)或者生氣．
Because of carelessness，we often make the same mistakes easily．因?yàn)榇中模�我們很容易犯同樣的錯(cuò)誤．
think about 考慮
instead of 而不是
I have tried my best to keep a balance between study and hobbied．我盡自己最大的努力來(lái)保持學(xué)習(xí)和愛(ài)好兩者之間的平衡．
come true 實(shí)現(xiàn)

解答 As post-90 students，we are often willing to help others when they are in trouble．We are also active and interested in something new．We like to do things differently．However，it is easy for us to get excited or angry．Because of carelessness，we often make the same mistakes easily．Sometimes we only think about our own feelings instead of others．My dream is to be an English teacher．I have tried my best to keep a balance between study and hobbies．I believe my dream will come true．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文是一篇圖表作文，大綱及相關(guān)要求已給出，要求考生認(rèn)真審題，確定作文內(nèi)容、時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)等細(xì)節(jié)問(wèn)題．作文在語(yǔ)法正確、語(yǔ)句通順的基礎(chǔ)上，條理應(yīng)清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)完整，且應(yīng)多使用寫(xiě)作相關(guān)短語(yǔ)及句型，多變換句型，增加作文生動(dòng)性，使作文更加流暢．