分析 這是一篇提綱作文.內(nèi)容是以運(yùn)動(dòng)為中心談?wù)勀愕奶亻L(zhǎng)、愛(ài)好和夢(mèng)想.時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí).人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng).
寫(xiě)作思路:考生需要首先審清主題,圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文.
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文,即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn):
1)你的特長(zhǎng)和愛(ài)好.
2)你想成為專(zhuān)業(yè)運(yùn)動(dòng)員(professional athlete),但你的父母不同意,請(qǐng)你闡述利弊.
3)請(qǐng)談?wù)撃銓⑷绾螢閷?shí)現(xiàn)你的夢(mèng)想而努力,并堅(jiān)信你的夢(mèng)想一定會(huì)成真.
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ):
be proud of 以…為自豪
want sb to do sth 想要某人做某事
make a living 謀生
give up放棄
【高分句型】
1.I'm Wu Bing,①a middle school student ②who dreams to be a professional athlete.
①作為Wu Bing的同位語(yǔ).
②定語(yǔ)從句,關(guān)系詞who,修飾先行詞student,在從句中作主語(yǔ).
2.They say ①②if I don't succeed,③it will be hard for me to find another way ④to make a living.
①say后接的是賓語(yǔ)從句.
②if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句,遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則.
③it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)做某事是怎么樣的,it是形式主語(yǔ),動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語(yǔ).
④動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)做后置定語(yǔ),修飾前面的another way.make a living 謀生.
解答 I'm Wu Bing,a middle school student who dreams to be a professional athlete.【高分句型】I love running and I enjoy the feeling while I'm running on the playground.I have won many gold medals in the sports meeting.So I'm very proud of myself.(特長(zhǎng)和愛(ài)好)However,my parents don't agree.They want me to get a good education as many other kids do.They say if I don't succeed,it will be hard for me to find another way to make a living.【高分句型】I can understand them,but I'll never give up.(父母不同意說(shuō)說(shuō)利弊)I'll do lots of practice and I'm sure I can achieve my dream.(如何為實(shí)現(xiàn)你的夢(mèng)想而努力,并堅(jiān)信夢(mèng)想一定會(huì)成真)
點(diǎn)評(píng) 以提綱提供情景的作文.要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的正確性,就不會(huì)造成審題不清而偏離主題,但要注意,文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn).行文間要注意簡(jiǎn)化描述,用簡(jiǎn)短的語(yǔ)句代替冗長(zhǎng)的語(yǔ)句.在作文完成的時(shí)候,應(yīng)該檢查、修改,以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié).
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