Question

6．假定學(xué)校下周舉辦英語(yǔ)作文比賽，你準(zhǔn)備就如何預(yù)防H1N1（甲型流感）以下面 要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿．
1．常開(kāi)窗通風(fēng)，不去人多擁擠的地方．
2．勤洗手，勤換衣物．
3．多喝水，多吃水果蔬菜．
4．早睡早起，多鍛煉．
注意1：詞數(shù)60〜80．開(kāi)頭巳給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2：圍繞所給要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫．
Let's Keep off H1N1
As we know，H1N1 is dangerous．How can we keep it away from our life？In our daily life，we had better often open the windows of our houses or classrooms to let fresh air in．Don't stay in crowded places．And we should wash our hands before meals and wash our clothes often to keep clean．Besides，it is necessary for us to have enough water and fruit and vegetables．At the same time，getting up early and going to bed early is a good habit．The most important thing is to exercise more to build up our bodies．
As we know，H1N1is dangerous．How can we keep it away from our life？In our daily life．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)勅绾晤A(yù)防H1N1（甲型流感）．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．常開(kāi)窗通風(fēng)，不去人多擁擠的地方．
2．勤洗手，勤換衣物．
3．多喝水，多吃水果蔬菜．
4．早睡早起，多鍛煉．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
had better do sth 最好做某事
keep+adj保持怎么樣
besides 另外
it's+adj+for sb to do sth對(duì)某人而言做某事是怎么樣的
at the same time同時(shí)
get up起床
go to bed睡覺(jué)
高分句型：
1．In our daily life，we ①had better often open the windows of our houses or classrooms ②to let fresh air in．
①had better do sth 最好做某事，注意后面是加上動(dòng)詞原形．
②to let fresh air in動(dòng)詞不定式作為目的狀語(yǔ)，非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的運(yùn)用．
2．①Besides，②it is necessary for us to have enough water and fruit and vegetables．
①besides另外，引出下文．
②it's+adj+for sb to do sth對(duì)某人而言做某事是怎么樣的，it作為形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式作為真正主語(yǔ)．

解答 Let's Keep off H1N1
As we know，H1N1 is dangerous．How can we keep it away from our life？In our daily life，we had better often open the windows of our houses or classrooms to let fresh air in．（高分句型）Don't stay in crowded places．（常開(kāi)窗通風(fēng)，不去人多擁擠的地方）And we should wash our hands before meals and wash our clothes often to keep clean．（勤洗手，勤換衣物．）Besides，it is necessary for us to have enough water and fruit and vegetables．（高分句型）（多喝水，多吃水果蔬菜．）At the same time，getting up early and going to bed early is a good habit．The most important thing is to exercise more to build up our bodies．（早睡早起，多鍛煉）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文是一篇給材料作文，短文的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出．寫(xiě)作時(shí)先要圍繞這些要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，注意將這些要點(diǎn)全部表達(dá)出來(lái)，并且要有適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，在談到自己的觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，要結(jié)合活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)出自己的觀點(diǎn)．