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目前很多學生忙于功課，為了能學得更好，有些學生增加了大量的課外輔導班，如何讓學校生活更精彩更有意義是困擾很多學生的問題。作為即將畢業(yè)的初中學生，學校請你結(jié)合自己的做法，給其他學生做個演講，談談你的看法。以“How to become a successful middle school student”為題。請你根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)的提示, 準備一份英語發(fā)言稿。

What to do	How to do it
培養(yǎng)良好的習慣	認真聽講，積極參與 及時復習，從錯誤中吸取教訓
體育鍛煉	……
其他方面	嚴格遵守校規(guī)校紀 如果需要，理智選擇課外輔導班 ……

注意事項：

1. 發(fā)言稿須包括表格中所有提示內(nèi)容，要求語句通順、意思連貫；

2. 除表格提供的建議外，必須再寫出1-2條建議，并做適當發(fā)揮；

3. 詞數(shù)在90個左右，發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Good morning, everyone! It is my great honor to be here to share with you my opinions on how to become a successful middle school student. A great number of students are busy with their lessons and even some students have to go to extra classes after school. How can we study more effectively and be successful? Here are some suggestions.

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All in all, a successful middle school student can well balance study and hobbies. No pains, no gains. With your great efforts, you will become a successful middle school student.

Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】Firstly, developing the good learning habits is of great importance. We are supposed to have good learning habits. I often listen to my teachers carefully in class and take an active part in the class. Every day I go over what has been taught in time after class. And I often learn from mistakes instead of being afraid of making mistakes.

Secondly, it’s helpful for our study to have good health. I spend at least an hour doing exercise every day.

Thirdly, strictly following the school rules will help you. (School rules are made to make sure that every student is safe at school). Besides, You’d better choose the extra classes wisely if necessary. Don’t make yourself too tired with lessons. If you have some problems, you should ask the teachers or classmates for help. (We’d better make good use of time. )

【解析】

這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)表格內(nèi)的提示，以“How to become a successful middle school student”為題，寫一份英語發(fā)言稿。本文人稱主要是第一人稱和第二人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時。認為閱讀材料，認真審題，確定主題，認真閱讀所給提示，所給提示就是本文的提綱要點，根據(jù)要點適當發(fā)揮，列出提綱。短文必須包含提示內(nèi)容，條理清楚，注意使用表達順序詞（Firstly，Secondly, Thirdly, Besides）。要運用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標點、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：

首先，培養(yǎng)良好的學習習慣非常重要。我們應該有良好的學習習慣。我經(jīng)常在課堂上認真聽老師的話，積極參加課堂活動。每一天，我都會在課后復習課后所學的東西。我經(jīng)常從錯誤中學習，而不是害怕犯錯。

其次，它有助于我們的學習健康。我每天至少花一個小時做運動。

第三，嚴格遵守校規(guī)會對你有所幫助。（學校規(guī)定要確保每個學生在學校都安全）。另外，如果必要的話，你最好明智地選擇額外的課程。不要讓自己對功課感到疲倦。如果你有問題，你應該向老師或同學求助。（我們最好好好利用時間。）