Question

【題目】假如你是張鵬 ，轉學去了杭州。你的好友王新來信詢問你的近況，并告訴你他暑假要來看你。請根據(jù)以下提示，紿王新寫一封回信。
寫作要點：1）表達你收到他來信后的激動心情。
2）介紹新學校。①設施:一個大操場，一個圖書館。②師生:友善，易于相處。
3）針對他獨自乘火車來杭州提出具體建議。
寫作要求：1）不得使用真實的姓名和學校名。
2）時適當加入細節(jié)，使內容充實，行文連貫。
3）字跡工整、語言精練、表達準確、條理淸晰。
4）至少80詞。
Dear Wang Xin,
How are you doing?
Best wishes!
Yours，
Zhang Peng

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

Dear Wang Xin，

How are you doing? I'm very happy to hear from you. Now I tell you something about my new school. My new school is very big and beautiful. There is a big playgroud and a library. We often play sports in the playground and read books in the library. The teachers and students here are very kind and friendly. It's easy to get on well with them. I like my new school.

I know that you will come to Hangzhou by yourself. Be careful when you are on the train. Beforearriving ， tell me your train number and when you will arrive， I will meet you at the station. Hope you have a good trip!

Best wishes!

Yours，

Zhang Peng

【解析】根據(jù)題目要求，本文寫作內容：1. 表達你收到來信后的激動心情。2.介紹所在學校的設施，一個操場一個圖書館；師生友善易于相處。3.針對她獨自乘火車提出建議。建議用兩個段落進行闡述，注意調理清晰，語言準確，談論這件事用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。人稱用第一人稱。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。