Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

根據(jù)下表提示，以My friend為題寫一篇短文。

基本情況	Millie，12歲， 英國(guó)人 陽光中學(xué)七年級(jí)一班學(xué)生
服裝打扮	粉色或藍(lán)色衣服，看起來既現(xiàn)代又漂亮
興趣愛好	喜歡聽音樂，擅長(zhǎng)畫畫
學(xué)習(xí)情況	學(xué)習(xí)努力，最喜歡的學(xué)科是歷史 經(jīng)常幫助同學(xué)學(xué)功課,
生活方式	喜歡吃漢堡和巧克力，很少進(jìn)行體育運(yùn)動(dòng) （你覺得該是她改變生活方式的時(shí)候了，并提出至少兩條建議。）

注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右 。

2．短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My Friend

I have a friend. Her name is Millie. She is twelve years old. She is from England but she lives in Nantong now. She studies in Yang Guang Middle School. She is in Class One, Grade Seven. She wears pink or blue clothes, and looks modern and beautiful. She likes listening to music and she is good at drawing. She works hard. Her favorite subject is history. She often helps classmates do homework. She likes eating hamburgers and chocolate, and she seldom exercises. So she is fat and unhealthy. I think she should change her living habits. She had better eat more vegetables and fruit and less meat or hamburgers. She should do some sports such as running and swimming. In this way, she will have a healthy life.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的朋友Millie。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Her name is...，She is...，She likes...，She often helps...，She should...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系.

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我的朋友的名字，接下來介紹基本情況、服裝打扮、興趣愛好、學(xué)習(xí)情況和生活方式，最后建議她改變生活習(xí)慣。此處用了be from, live in, like doing sth, be good at doing sth, help sb do sth, in this way, have a healthy life等這些詞組，也讓文章增色不少。