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8．假如你是陽光中學(xué)的李磊，你在學(xué)校網(wǎng)站看到國際學(xué)生Stephen的求助信．請根據(jù)Stephen信的內(nèi)容，用英語給Stephen寫一封回信，介紹你校圖書館借書的要求和流程．

HELP NEEDED I'm Stephen，an intemational student from Britain．I would like to know how to borrow books from the school library．Should I bring my student's card with me？How long can I keep a book？I wonder if you can provide any tips on borrowing books． Please email me at Stephen HYPERLINK"mailto：220@yahoo．com．Thank"220@yahoo．com．Thank you． Stephen

注意：
1．文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
2．語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；
3．詞數(shù)80左右，郵件的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Stephen，
I am writing to tell you how to borrow books from the school library．Remember to go to the library with your student's card．When you enter the library，first show your student's card to a librarian．Then you can choose books you want．At last you can take the books away after you show them to a librarian．You can only borrow 3 books at a time and keep them for a month．You will have to go back to the library to renew the books if you want to keep them longer．Please email me if you have any other questions．
Yours faithfully，Li Lei

Yours faithfully．
Li Lei．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封信，需要回答來信中的問題，怎么借書，需不需要帶學(xué)生證，書可以借多久以及借書的步驟，寫作時時態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第二人稱，句子要通順連貫，沒有語法錯誤．動筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語，句式等問題．
高分句型分析：
1．When you enter the library，first show your student's card to a librarian．當(dāng)你進(jìn)入圖書館時，首先你得把學(xué)生證給圖書管理員看看．
這是when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句，當(dāng)…時候，show sth．to sb．把某物給某人看．
2．You will have to go back to the library to renew the books if you want to keep them longer．如果你想保持更長的時間，你將不得不回到圖書館去更新這些書．
這是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句用一般將來時，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時．

解答 Dear Stephen，
I am writing to tell you how to borrow books from the school library【第一句，點明主題】．Remember to go to the library with your student's card．When you enter the library，first show your student's card to a librarian【高分句型一，when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句】．Then you can choose books you want．At last you can take the books away after you show them to a librarian．【借書步驟】． You can only borrow 3 books at a time and keep them for a month．You will have to go back to the library to renew the books if you want to keep them longer【高分句型二，if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句】【借書時間】． Please email me if you have any other questions． 
Yours faithfully，
Li Lei

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關(guān)的詞匯，多閱讀此類題材，將詞匯歸類整理；動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞．寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．