Question

3．生活中每個(gè)人都有過與他人分享的體驗(yàn)，如分享一本有趣的書、一段難忘的經(jīng)歷、一個(gè)閃光的想法…
現(xiàn)在，某英文報(bào)紙就分享（Sharing）話題征文，請(qǐng)你投稿．描述一次你與他人分享的經(jīng)歷，并談?wù)勀愕母惺埽?br />提示詞語：share…with…；experience； interest； learn； change； encourage； enjoy； happiness； confident．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
The first test made me so nervous that I failed．第一次測(cè)試使我很緊張，我失敗了．
so…that…如此…以致于，that后引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句．
高分句型二：
①Sharing with friends helped me bring back my confidence and ②fit in with others．與朋友分享幫助我找回我的自信，融入別人．
①動(dòng)名詞sharing作主語
②fit in with others"與別人友好相處"

解答 One possible version
    I had an experience of sharing．When my family moved，I had to go to a new school and study in a new class．The first test made me so nervous that I failed．【高分句型一】I got worried and felt helpless until one of my new classmates came up t o me and asked softly if I was OK．After I told him about my problem，he gave me some advice．【描述一次與他人分享的經(jīng)歷】，F(xiàn)rom then on，we got to know each other and shared our ideas，problems，and happiness．We became good friends．Sharing with friends helped me bring back my confidence and fit in with others．【高分句型二】【我的感受】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇提綱作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個(gè)基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容．盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容，避免使用無把握或偏、難句型．注意所寫句子要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．