Question

15．目前，中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)壓力大，學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)重，學(xué)生的身體素質(zhì)越來(lái)越差．針對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象，你校開(kāi)展了豐富多慘的課外活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示沒(méi)寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文．
1 你認(rèn)為開(kāi)展課外活動(dòng)有哪些好處？
2 你校課外活動(dòng)有哪些形式？
3 對(duì)你校開(kāi)展課外活動(dòng)提出1至2條建議．
注意：1 詞數(shù)：80詞左右．（短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
2 文中不得提及具體人名，校名及地名．
Out-of-class activities are very important to us teenagers．
Doing out-of-class activities every day helps us keep healthy and makes us relaxed from the stress．At the same time，through those activities，we can learn many things that we can't get from books．

In our school，there are many kinds of out-ofclass activities that we can do．We can play ball games to build a strong body．Playing chess with others makes us wiser and learn to do things step by step．Besides，going to the singing or dancing party helps us relax a lot．

Now we students have too much homework to do after school．I hope our teachers will leave us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in those activities．I also hope our school can organize more out-of-class activities for us．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)勜S富的課外活動(dòng)．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1 你認(rèn)為開(kāi)展課外活動(dòng)有哪些好處？
2 你校課外活動(dòng)有哪些形式？
3 對(duì)你校開(kāi)展課外活動(dòng)提出1至2條建議
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事
make sb+adj 讓某人怎么樣
step by step 一步步
take part in 參加
【高分句型】
1．At the same time，①through those activities，we can learn many things ②that we can't get from books．
①through 介詞，通過(guò)，做狀語(yǔ)
②that是關(guān)系詞的定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞things．
2．①Besides，②going to the singing or dancing party ③helps us relax a lot．
①besides 另外
②動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)helps．
③help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事
3．I hope①our teachers will leave us less homework ②so that we can have more time ③to take part in those activities．
①省略了that的賓語(yǔ)從句，作為hope的賓語(yǔ)．
②so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句．
③動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)．

解答 Out-of-class activities are very important to us teenagers．Doing out-of-class activities every day helps us keep healthy and makes us relaxed from the stress．At the same time，through those activities，we can learn many things that we can't get from books．【高分句型】（開(kāi)展課外活動(dòng)有哪些好處）In our school，there are many kinds of out-of class activities that we can do．We can play ball games to build a strong body．Playing chess with others makes us wiser and learn to do things step by step．Besides，going to the singing or dancing party helps us relax a lot．（課外活動(dòng)有哪些形式）【高分句型】Now we students have too much homework to do after school．I hope our teachers will leave us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in those activities．【高分句型】I also hope our school can organize more out-of-class activities for us．（建議）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 此題是命題式作文，要求根據(jù)提示及所給材料談?wù)勜S富的課外活動(dòng)，主要考查寫(xiě)作能力，也是對(duì)英語(yǔ)綜合知識(shí)運(yùn)用的考查，這就要求仔細(xì)分析所給提示，不要漏掉提示要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，寫(xiě)出語(yǔ)言流暢，意思連貫的文章．
這篇文章語(yǔ)言連貫，簡(jiǎn)潔明了．在文章中使用不少?gòu)?fù)合句和固定短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，同時(shí)也體現(xiàn)出作者的寫(xiě)作功底