Question

最近，你看到某英文報社正在征集主題為“如何才能受人歡迎”的短文，對此你很感興趣。請你根據(jù)以下提示談?wù)勛约旱南敕ǎ�給該報社投稿。

要點提示：

1、衣著干凈、整齊，保持微笑

2、誠實，樂于助人

3、懂得與人合作

4、其他

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Answer 1

How to be popular

Most people would like to be popular with others, but what is the secret to achieve popularity? In fact, it is very simple. The first step is to improve our appearance. We should always make sure that we dress well and smile warmly. In this way people will surely be impressed by our confidence. Another important step is to build our character. We should always be honest and willing to help others whenever it is necessary. It’s also important to put others first. If we know how to work and get on well with others, then people will feel comfortable enough to trust us. I am sure we’ll be popular with others if we can do all of the above.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文。最近，你看到某英文報社正在征集主題為“如何才能受人歡迎”的短文，對此你很感興趣。請你根據(jù)以下提示談?wù)勛约旱南敕�，給該報社投稿。要把所提示的點寫全，可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當增加細節(jié)，寫作時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。不要總是用簡單句，根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩，注意要求的字數(shù)在100詞左右，不要太多或太少。

【亮點說明】

We should always make sure that we dress well and smile warmly.句中包含一個that引導的狀語從句；In this way people will surely be impressed by our confidence. 句中運用了一般將來時態(tài)的被動語態(tài)；We should always be honest and willing to help others whenever it is necessary. 句中包含一個whenever引導的時間狀語從句；If we know how to work and get on well with others, then people will feel comfortable enough to trust us.句中含一個if引導的條件狀語從句；I am sure we’ll be popular with others if we can do all of the above.句中含一個賓語從句和一個條件狀語從句。

考點：考查話題類作文。