Question

13．假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李津，你校擬向美國(guó)友好交流學(xué)校的中文班捐贈(zèng)一批圖書．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一封郵件與中文班班長(zhǎng)Chris聯(lián)系，并告知將于今年七月赴對(duì)方學(xué)校參加夏令營(yíng)時(shí)帶去贈(zèng)書．
（1）自我介紹；
（2）擬捐贈(zèng)圖書的類型、冊(cè)數(shù)、用途等；
（3）詢問對(duì)方的其他需求．
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；
（2）請(qǐng)適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫．
參考詞匯：學(xué)生會(huì) the Student Union
Dear Chris．

Answer 1

分析 本作文為寫一封電子郵件，屬于半開放式作文．題目中給出了重點(diǎn)提示，需要考生適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．時(shí)態(tài)為一般將來時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱用第一人稱．重要短語：donate …．to …．（捐贈(zèng)），give away（捐贈(zèng)），in total（總計(jì)，總共），hopefully（希望），by the way（順便說），make contact with（聯(lián)系）．

解答 Dear Chris，
    How are you doing？I'm chairman of the Student Union in Chenguang High School．（概括）
Our school will donate some books to the Chinese class of the friendly exchange school in the US．We will give away different types of books which include language learning，Chinese history，Chinese Poetry，and others．【高分句型】There are，in total，about 300 books．Hopefully，these books will help the students to know and learn Chinese better．（捐贈(zèng)細(xì)節(jié)）
By the way，when I come to your school to take part in the summer camp in July this year，I will take the books along with me．If there is something else we can do for you，please make contact with us in time．（詢問其它需求）
Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                          Yours，
                                                                                           Li Jin

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．書信（電子郵件）類作文還要注意書信格式．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．