Question

【題目】根據以下信息，寫一篇視頻介紹，內容包括：

基本信息： （1）片名：穹頂之下 （2）作者：柴靜，前中央電視臺主持人及記者 （3）發(fā)布時間：2015年2月28日 （4）拍攝過程：耗時大概一年，自費拍攝，耗資過百萬 （5）內容：長達103分鐘，探討霧霾產生的原因，危害及解決方法。 （6）效應：網絡點擊率破億，引發(fā)人們的熱議。 （7）目的：喚起人們對空氣污染的重視和鼓勵人們加入到環(huán)保行動中。

穹頂：dome；霧霾：smog

[寫作要求] 1. 只能用5個句子表達全部內容。 2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。

[評分標準] 句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章連貫。

Answer 1

【答案】

A smog documentary titled Under the Dome was released on websites on February 28, 2015 by Chai Jing, a former reporter and host at China Central Television. It took a year or so to produce before being made public through websites and Char Jing, at her own expense, spent more than 1 million yuan making it. The 103-minute documentary deeply explored and highlighted the causes, the consequences of heavy smog and the ways to solve it. Since it was released, it has been under heated discussion, attracting more than 100 million viewers within 24 hours. The documentary aims to raise the public awareness about air pollution and encourage people to join in efforts to protect the environment.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。本文主要應用虛擬語氣，所以在寫作時，要尤其注意虛擬語氣的表達方式。根據情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等

【亮點說明】范文一些常見的短語spend money doing sth 花費錢做某事；the way to do 做某事的方式 ；under heated discussion熱烈討論；It took a year or so to produce before being made public through websites and Char Jing, at her own expense, spent more than 1 million yuan making it.這個句子運用到it take sb some time to do 花費某人多長時間做某事，it做形式主語，真正的主語是后面的不定式；Since it was released, it has been under heated discussion, attracting more than 100 million viewers within 24 hours這個句子運用現(xiàn)在完成時及atrracting做伴隨狀語；