Question

 假設(shè)你是李華。時(shí)下,你校不少學(xué)生帶手機(jī)上學(xué)。為此,你班組織了一次班會(huì)，討論中學(xué)生上學(xué)是否有必要帶手機(jī)。請(qǐng)你給英語(yǔ)筆友Tom寫(xiě)封信，根據(jù)下表提供的信息，客觀地介紹討論的情況�？山Y(jié)合你校實(shí)際進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，并發(fā)表自己的看法。

一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為	一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為	你的觀點(diǎn)
方便；時(shí)尚。	中學(xué)生自控能力差；玩手機(jī)浪費(fèi)時(shí)間。	（請(qǐng)你實(shí)話(huà)實(shí)說(shuō)）

注意：

1．     正確使用英文書(shū)信的基本格式。詞數(shù)：120左右。

Dear Tom,                                                           

Recently we’ve had a class meeting to discuss whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school. …                         

 

 

 

 

Yours truly,                                            

Li  Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

Recently we’ve had a class meeting to discuss whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school.

Some of the students think that it is more convenient for them to keep in touch with their parents and friends if they have a mobile phone. And what’s more, it’s a fashion.

However, others think that middle school students are not old enough to control themselves. It is a waste of time for students to play games and send messages to each other by mobile phone. And it’s easy to cause the students to vie(攀比，競(jìng)爭(zhēng)) with each other. If necessary, they can make phone calls by using public phones on the campus.

In my opinion, as middle school students we should put all of our heart into our studies though following the fashion is understandable. What do you think of it?

With best wishes,                               

Yours truly,

Li  Hua

【解析】

這篇作文是以寫(xiě)信的形式，注意其格式，認(rèn)真審題，知道要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，把要點(diǎn)加以整理，用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫瓦M(jìn)行概括；概括時(shí)可以主要用簡(jiǎn)單句，也可以適當(dāng)用復(fù)雜句，但要確保復(fù)雜句使用正確；切記要點(diǎn)要全，不要遺漏；注意語(yǔ)法正確，單詞拼寫(xiě)正確，字體干凈。