【題目】假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職，已寫(xiě)好申請(qǐng)書(shū)和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷（resume）。給外教Ms Jenkins 寫(xiě)信，請(qǐng)她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，已使行文連貫。

寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：試題為應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信寫(xiě)作，試題只給出寫(xiě)作框架，并未給出所有的具體寫(xiě)作細(xì)節(jié)，為半開(kāi)放性寫(xiě)作。寫(xiě)好此文，需注意三點(diǎn)：

一是書(shū)信格式要準(zhǔn)確，信的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，但一定要寫(xiě)好信的結(jié)尾。

二是要詳略得當(dāng)，本文應(yīng)重點(diǎn)寫(xiě)的是對(duì)箱子的描述。

三要注意適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹?xì)節(jié)，恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B接過(guò)渡詞，以使行文連貫。

Dear Ms Jenkins,

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【答案】

Dear Ms Jenkins,

I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.

In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.

Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇考生們熟悉的書(shū)信類體裁的書(shū)面表達(dá)，內(nèi)容貼近學(xué)生生活，所以人人有話可說(shuō)。文章沒(méi)有給出開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾，所以考生要注意書(shū)信的格式，包括稱呼語(yǔ)，正文以及結(jié)束語(yǔ)等。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意先列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，而且要注意將來(lái)時(shí)、現(xiàn)在時(shí)以及現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)的交錯(cuò)使用；注意使用高級(jí)句式和多種結(jié)構(gòu)的使用，而且語(yǔ)氣要委婉禮貌。

本題考查內(nèi)容是有關(guān)書(shū)信的應(yīng)用文，同時(shí)又考查了學(xué)生對(duì)寫(xiě)個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷方面的能力，可謂實(shí)用性極強(qiáng)。范文格式正確，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言通順流暢，很好地完成了寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。在本文中開(kāi)頭提出寫(xiě)信的目的，然后具體講述自己的困難，再提出請(qǐng)求，最后表達(dá)自己的感激之情。所以在內(nèi)容上邏輯性較強(qiáng)。

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