Question

13．假如你是李華，你校學生會于2014年5月7日下午舉行了"校園書市（a campus book fair）"活動．請你寫封email給你的美國筆友Peter，告訴他此次活動的有關情況．內(nèi)容包括：
1．活動目的：①給同學們提供一個交換圖書的機會
②更好地利用讀過的書
2．具體內(nèi)容：①把你不想保留的書拿到書市上出售
②購買你喜歡的書
③交換圖書
3．談談你的感想和體會．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)不少于100；
2．請勿提及真實學校姓名：
3． 可適當加入細節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫；
4．開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．

Answer 1

分析 本文為提綱類的書信作文，要求給你的美國筆友Peter，告訴他"校園書市（a campus book fair）"活動的有關情況．要點都已經(jīng)給出，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出．難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述．審題時注意本文使用一般過去時，人稱主要用第一人稱．
重要短語：
provide sb with an opportunity to do sth給某人一個做某事的機會；make better use of更好地利用；not only…but also…不但…而且…；As far as I'm concerned就我個人而言；be beneficial to sb對某人有利；On the one hand，…On the other hand，…一方面…另一方面…；
高分句型：
1．I like this activity，which is beneficial to us students．這里用了which引導的非限制性定語從句．
2．I not only got rid of several books but also bought a few books I really wanted．使用了not only…but also連接的兩個并列的謂語動詞短語．
3．I wish more events like this book fair would be held in our school．本句中wish后面的賓語從句中運用了虛擬語氣的用法．

解答 Hello Peter!How are you going these days？
In order to provide us students with an opportunity to exchange books and make better use of our used books，our Students'Union held a campus book fair on the afternoon of June 15，2013．（說明活動目的及時間）
At the book fair，students could sell unwanted books，buy books they needed or simply trade books with each other．Like other fairs of this kind，prices were typically very low．Happily，I not only got rid of several books but also bought a few books I really wanted．（高分句型）（活動內(nèi)容）
As far as I'm concerned，I like this activity，which is beneficial to us students．（高分句型）On the one hand，I felt my social skills had been well practiced and improved．On the other hand，this activity also gave us an excellent opportunity to feel a bit of the real world．I wish more events like this book fair would be held in our school．（高分句型）（個人感想）
Looking forward to hearing from you!
Love，
Li Hua

點評 書信類短文的關鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略．同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采．