Question

1．第二節(jié)書面表達(dá)（注意：在試題卷上作答無效）
假定你是李華，正在一所英國學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)暑期課程，遇到一些困難，希望得到學(xué)校輔導(dǎo)
中心（Learning Center）的幫助．根據(jù)學(xué)校規(guī)定，你需書面預(yù)約，請按下列要點(diǎn)寫一封信：
1．本人簡介；
2．求助內(nèi)容：
3．約定時(shí)間；
4．你的聯(lián)系方式（Email：lihua@1236．com；Phone：12345678）．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右：
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫：
3．結(jié)束語已為你寫好．
Dear  Sir/Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university．I'm writing to ask for help．I came here last month and found my courses interesting．
But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library．I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I'm anxious to get help from you．I have no lessons on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons．Please let me know which day is OK with you．You may e-mail or phone me．
Here are my e-mail address and phone number：Email：lihua@126．com； Phone：12345678．
Look forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是應(yīng)用文，根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)寫一封信，希望得到學(xué)校輔導(dǎo)中心的幫助，寫作要點(diǎn)：1．本人簡介； 2．求助內(nèi)容：3．約定時(shí)間； 4．聯(lián)系方式．屬提綱作文．在寫作時(shí)人稱以第一人稱為主．時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)為主．重要短語：take summer courses （上暑期課…），write to sb （寫信給某人），ask for help（尋求幫助），have some difficulties with…（做…有困難），have no idea of （不知道），be anxious to do （渴望做），look forward to doing（期望做）．

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
 I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university．I'm writing to ask for help．I came here last month and found my courses interesting．（本人簡介） But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library．【高分句型】（求助內(nèi)容）I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I'm anxious to get help from you．I have no lessons on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons．Please let me know which day is OK with you．【高分句型】You may e-mail or phone me．（約定時(shí)間） Here are my e-mail address and phone number：Email：lihua@126．com； Phone：12345678．（聯(lián)系方式）
Look forward to your reply．
Yours，
 Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．