Question

11．為紀念汶川大地震三周年，某英文報發(fā)起關于災區(qū)新貌的征文活動．請根據(jù)以下圖片提示，以"Great Changes"為題，用英語寫一篇短文應征．內容要點如下：
（1）某中學災后三年來的變化，如教學與活動場所，以及師生精神面貌等；
（2）發(fā)生變化的原因；
（3）你的感想．
注意：
（1）短文標題與開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
（2）可根據(jù)圖片提示適當發(fā)揮
（3）詞數(shù)：120左右
Great Changes
    I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past tree years．
On May 12，2008，a severe earthquake destroyed almost everything in the school，leaving badly-damaged buildings．It is now，however，taking on a new look．Tall buildings have been put up，including classroom and laboratory buildings，and a library．There is also a newly-built standard playground．In the new environment，teachers and students are living happily and working hard．It is really amazing that the once-ruined place has now been turned into a beautiful school，full of life．
Obviously，without the help of the whole society，there would be no new schoo l today．It is love and concern that have brought the great changes．Many hands make light work．We can work wonders if we continue as a family，caring for each other and helping those in need．Union is strength．．

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"圖表+提綱類"形式，根據(jù)文章所給提示信息和圖片提示以"Great Changes"為題給某英文報寫一篇征文．寫作要點：（1）某中學災后三年來的變化，如教學與活動場所，以及師生精神面貌等；（2）發(fā)生變化的原因；（3）你的感想．既是提綱作文又是圖畫類作文．時態(tài)應該以一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時為主．人稱以第三人稱為主．重要短語：be impressed by（對…．印象深刻），take place  （發(fā)生），take on a new look （呈現(xiàn)新面貌），turned into （變成），without the help of （在…．幫助之下），care for（關心），in need （需要）．

解答 Great Changes
     I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past three years．
     On May 12，2008，a severe earthquake destroyed almost everything in the school，leaving badly-damaged buildings．【高分句型】It is now，however，taking on a new look．Tall buildings have been put up，including classroom and laboratory buildings，and a library．There is also a newly-built standard playground．In the new environment，teachers and students are living happily and working hard．It is really amazing that the once-ruined place has now been turned into a beautiful school，full of life．【高分句型】（三年來的變化）
     Obviously，without the help of the whole society，there would be no new schoo l today．【高分句型】It is love and concern that have brought the great changes．（發(fā)生變化的原因） Many hands make light work．【高分句型】We can work wonders if we continue as a family，caring for each other and helping those in need．Union is strength..（你的感想）

點評 寫好這類圖片及提綱式作文的關鍵是認真分析所給提示信息，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將要點完整地表述出來，并認真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點，發(fā)揮想象，語言力求準確、簡潔．選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等．