Question

11．Every morning John goes to work by trains．He always   buys a newspaper，it helps to make the time pass more quickly．
   One Thursday morning，he turned on the sports page．He wanted   to see the report about an important football match the night   before．The repot was such interesting that  he forgot to get off  at his station．He didn't know it when he saw the sea．He got   off at the next station，and have to wait a long time for  a train to  go back．Of course，he arrived very lately at the office．His boss were very angry when John told him why he was late．"Work is very more important than football!"

Answer 1

分析 本文主要講述John時(shí)常乘火車上班，總是買一份報(bào)紙消磨時(shí)間．一個(gè)周三的早上，他翻到運(yùn)動(dòng)版看前晚的一個(gè)重要的足球比賽的報(bào)道，由于太專注錯(cuò)過(guò)了站，只好到下一站下車．等了很長(zhǎng)時(shí)間才等到回去的火車．當(dāng)然，他遲到了，老板很生氣，說(shuō)："工作比足球重要．"

解答 Every morning John goes to work by trains．He always   buys a newspaper，it helps to make the time pass more quickly．
   One Thursday morning，he turned on the sports page．He wanted   to see the report about an important football match the night   before．The repot was such interesting that  he forgot to get off  at his station．He didn't know it when he saw the sea．He got   off at the next station，and have to wait a long time for  a train to  go back．Of course，he arrived very lately at the office．His boss were very angry when John told him why he was late．"Work is very more important than football!"
詳解：
1．trains改為train 考查固定搭配．by train意為"乘火車"，是固定搭配．
2．it改為which 考查定語(yǔ)從句．分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞newspaper在從句中作主語(yǔ)，用關(guān)系代詞which．
3．on改為to 考查詞語(yǔ)用法．turn on意為"打開(kāi)"，turn to意為"翻書到"，此處應(yīng)是：翻書到．
4．see改為read 考查詞語(yǔ)用法．"讀報(bào)告"用英語(yǔ)表示應(yīng)是：read the report．
5．such改為so 考查固定句型．so…that…意為"如此/這么…以致于…"，句型中的so是副詞，常常用來(lái)修飾形容詞或副詞，常用句型為：主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+so+adj．/adv．+that從句．
6．when改為until 考查固定搭配．not…until意為"直到…才"，是固定搭配．
7．have改為had 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)．此處講述的是過(guò)去的事情，要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)．
8．lately改為late 考查詞語(yǔ)用法．lately意為"近來(lái)，最近"，late意為"遲，晚"，此處應(yīng)是：遲，晚．
9．were改為was 考查主謂一致．主語(yǔ)boss是單數(shù)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞也應(yīng)用單數(shù)形式was．
10．very改為much 考查形容詞比較級(jí)．very不修飾形容詞比較級(jí)，要用much修飾．

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