Question

假定你是李華，你的一位美國(guó)朋友Jane在太原學(xué)習(xí)中文兩年，即將回國(guó)�，F(xiàn)在由你給她發(fā)E-mail，邀請(qǐng)她參加為她舉辦的歡送會(huì)，內(nèi)容主要包括：

(1)祝賀她順利通過考試，她的學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步很大，為她驕傲; 

(2)感謝她幫助你們學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ);

(3)時(shí)間：星期六晚六點(diǎn); 

(4)地點(diǎn)：陽(yáng)光俱樂部(The Sun Club)302房間;

注意：  (1) 詞數(shù)：120 左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;   (3)參考詞匯：歡送會(huì) farewell party

Dear Jane,

Congratulations on your passing all the exams.

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                                                         Yours Sincerely,

　                                                               Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Jane,

    Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am delighted that you have made great progress in the two years of your studying Chinese in Taiyuan. There is no doubt that all you have gained is the result of your hard work. We are proud of you. And thank you very much for your help with our English. Without your help, we wouldn’t have found English easy and interesting to learn. The wonderful time which we spent together will never be forgotten.

So a farewell party for you has been prepared before you leave for the US. It will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. I wonder if you could come by 6:00 p.m. Our friends and I would appreciate it if you could come to the party.

Looking forward to your early reply.

                                                                    Yours

                                                                  Lihua

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)是一封電子郵件，開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，所以無需注意格式，只需關(guān)注內(nèi)容的表達(dá)、對(duì)要點(diǎn)適度進(jìn)行發(fā)揮和想象即可。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)該首先開門見山直接說出寫信的目的，即對(duì)她表示祝賀和感謝。然后在信的結(jié)尾部分提出對(duì)她參加歡送會(huì)的邀請(qǐng)，不要忘記寫出歡送會(huì)的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)。在語(yǔ)言方面，因?yàn)槭潜磉_(dá)寫信人的感激，所以語(yǔ)言要真切，發(fā)自內(nèi)心，對(duì)她的邀請(qǐng)也要真誠(chéng)，可以使用I wonder if you could come….,would you please give us the honour 等表示禮貌委婉的句子。此外，還要注意連接詞的使用，以使文章內(nèi)容連貫，語(yǔ)言通順。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章在結(jié)構(gòu)上簡(jiǎn)單明了。開頭首先表示了作者對(duì)Jane取得成績(jī)的祝賀，然后用I am delighted that …..和we are proud of you表示了對(duì)她的努力以及取得成績(jī)的肯定。接著用Without your help…表達(dá)了作者的感激和感謝之情，最后用I wonder if you could come by 6:00 p.m. 以及I would appreciate it if you could come to the party.提出作者真誠(chéng)的邀請(qǐng)，語(yǔ)言禮貌委婉。文中There is no doubt that…. The wonderful time which we spent together will never be forgotten等豐富的句式、以及虛擬語(yǔ)氣Without your help, we wouldn’t have found English easy and interesting to learn的使用充分顯示了作者扎實(shí)的語(yǔ)言功底。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱作文。