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假定你是李華，在一個(gè)英文網(wǎng)絡(luò)論壇上， 你看到一個(gè)名叫Grown-up的中學(xué)生發(fā)帖(post)尋求幫助，請(qǐng)根據(jù)帖子的內(nèi)容、寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)和要求回帖。

Grown-up        Post at 20-11-2011  21:18                             1#

Hi, everyone, I’m a Senior Grade Three student, and I am suffering from mental pressure these days, what should I do?                                                                            TOP

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寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1.  告訴Grown-up心理壓力不可避免； 2. 告訴Grown-up心里壓力的危害； 
3. 建議Grown-up應(yīng)正確面對(duì)心理壓力；4. 介紹你面對(duì)心里壓力時(shí)所采取的措施。
注意： 1. 詞數(shù)100左右。2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
3. 文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Hi, Grown-up,
It’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life.______________________
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Hope my ideas will work.

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Hi, Grown-up,                                                                  
It’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life. In my opinion, everyone will meet some mental pressure in their life. But if it lasts a long time, it may do harm to our body.
Whenever I meet pressure, I try to keep calm and think how to overcome it. Sometimes it is very effective. When I’m stressed out, I listen to music or do some sports. After that, I often find that my moods become much better. If I can’t overcome it, I will turn to my parents, teachers or good friends.
To sum up, we should face pressure bravely and overcome it actively. 
Hope my ideas will work.

解析試題分析：考查半開(kāi)放性作文。本文的話題是考生較為熟悉的學(xué)習(xí)的壓力，要根據(jù)所給的要點(diǎn)做適當(dāng)?shù)臄U(kuò)充，在介紹具體措施的時(shí)候可以從多鍛煉，增加睡眠的時(shí)間等角度出發(fā)做具體的闡述。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫(xiě)作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。
考點(diǎn)：考查半開(kāi)放性作文寫(xiě)作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：半開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。