Question

14．假定你是李華，下面四幅圖描繪了發(fā)生在你上學(xué)路上的一件事情，請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文．

I was walking to school this morning when I caught sight of an old woman with a walking stick lying on the ground．I quickly ran over to help her up and asked her what waswrong with her．She told me she slipped and fell due to heart trouble．I was worried and decided totake her to a hospital．And then I went to a department store near the hospital and contactedher family．Soon her son and daughter came to the hospital．They thanked and praised mefor my kindness by writing me a thank-you letter．Although I was late for school today，I felt very proud of what Ihad done．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是圖畫類作文，要求根據(jù)四幅圖的先后順序描述上學(xué)路上發(fā)生的一件事．
在寫作時(shí)，人稱以第一和第三人稱為主．時(shí)態(tài)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主．根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，抓住細(xì)節(jié)按順序安排好材料．
重要短語(yǔ)：catch sight of（看見），lie on the ground （躺在路上），run over（跑過(guò)去 ），due to（由于），heart trouble （心臟�。�，decide to do （決定做），contact sb（聯(lián)系某人），praised sb for sth（因…而贊揚(yáng)某人），be late for（遲到）．

【高分句型】
1．I was walking to school this morning when I caught sight of an old woman with a walking stick lying on the ground．
①這里用了固定句型"sb was/were doing when+另一個(gè)動(dòng)作"，某人正在做某事，就在此時(shí)又發(fā)生了另一個(gè)動(dòng)作．我正在上學(xué)的路上，就在此時(shí)看到了拄著拐杖的老婦人正躺在路上．
②現(xiàn)在分詞lying作an old woman的后置定語(yǔ)，表示動(dòng)作正在進(jìn)行．相當(dāng)于定語(yǔ)從句an old woman who was lying on the ground．
2．Although I was late for school today，I felt very proud of what I had done．
這里是由although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，逗號(hào)之后是主句．雖然我上學(xué)遲到了，但覺(jué)得很自豪．

解答 I was walking to school this morning when I caught sight of an old womanwith a walking stick lying on the ground．【高分句型】（Picture 1    上學(xué)路上看到摔倒在路上的老人）
I quickly ran over to helpher up and asked her what was wrong with her．She told me she slipped and fell due to heart trouble．（Picture 2    主動(dòng)扶起老人并詢問(wèn)情況）
I was worried and decided to take her toa hospital．And then I went to a department store near the hospital and contactedher family．（Picture 3   送老人到醫(yī)院并等待其家人）
Soon her son and daughter came to the hospital．They thanked and praised mefor my kindness by writing me a thank-you letter．（Picture 4  老人的家人趕到并對(duì)我的善舉表示感謝）
Although I was late forschool today，I felt very proud of what I had done．【高分句型】（感想）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫作看圖作文時(shí)，首先認(rèn)真看圖，結(jié)合圖片和文字，確定所要表達(dá)的主題是什么，然后圍繞主題，提煉要點(diǎn)，合理想象，對(duì)譯出的要點(diǎn)通過(guò)合理的組合，加上必要的連接詞使表達(dá)連貫．同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．