Question

14．假定你是李華，下面四幅圖描繪了發(fā)生在你上學路上的一件事情，請根據(jù)圖片內容用英語寫一篇短文．

I was walking to school this morning when I caught sight of an old woman with a walking stick lying on the ground．I quickly ran over to help her up and asked her what waswrong with her．She told me she slipped and fell due to heart trouble．I was worried and decided totake her to a hospital．And then I went to a department store near the hospital and contactedher family．Soon her son and daughter came to the hospital．They thanked and praised mefor my kindness by writing me a thank-you letter．Although I was late for school today，I felt very proud of what Ihad done．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是圖畫類作文，要求根據(jù)四幅圖的先后順序描述上學路上發(fā)生的一件事．
在寫作時，人稱以第一和第三人稱為主．時態(tài)以一般過去時為主．根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，抓住細節(jié)按順序安排好材料．
重要短語：catch sight of（看見），lie on the ground （躺在路上），run over（跑過去 ），due to（由于），heart trouble （心臟病），decide to do （決定做），contact sb（聯(lián)系某人），praised sb for sth（因…而贊揚某人），be late for（遲到）．

【高分句型】
1．I was walking to school this morning when I caught sight of an old woman with a walking stick lying on the ground．
①這里用了固定句型"sb was/were doing when+另一個動作"，某人正在做某事，就在此時又發(fā)生了另一個動作．我正在上學的路上，就在此時看到了拄著拐杖的老婦人正躺在路上．
②現(xiàn)在分詞lying作an old woman的后置定語，表示動作正在進行．相當于定語從句an old woman who was lying on the ground．
2．Although I was late for school today，I felt very proud of what I had done．
這里是由although引導的讓步狀語從句，逗號之后是主句．雖然我上學遲到了，但覺得很自豪．

解答 I was walking to school this morning when I caught sight of an old womanwith a walking stick lying on the ground．【高分句型】（Picture 1    上學路上看到摔倒在路上的老人）
I quickly ran over to helpher up and asked her what was wrong with her．She told me she slipped and fell due to heart trouble．（Picture 2    主動扶起老人并詢問情況）
I was worried and decided to take her toa hospital．And then I went to a department store near the hospital and contactedher family．（Picture 3   送老人到醫(yī)院并等待其家人）
Soon her son and daughter came to the hospital．They thanked and praised mefor my kindness by writing me a thank-you letter．（Picture 4  老人的家人趕到并對我的善舉表示感謝）
Although I was late forschool today，I felt very proud of what I had done．【高分句型】（感想）

點評 寫作看圖作文時，首先認真看圖，結合圖片和文字，確定所要表達的主題是什么，然后圍繞主題，提煉要點，合理想象，對譯出的要點通過合理的組合，加上必要的連接詞使表達連貫．同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．