10．假設你是華夏中學的學生李華．你和在鄭州上學的英國朋友Tom約好下周末去上海旅游，但你因故不能赴約．請你根據(jù)以下要點用英語給他寫一封電子郵件：
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Dear Tom，
I am really sorry to tell you that I can't go to Shanghai with you next weekend，which I have promised．（高分句型一）I apologize for it and want you to know what happened．（高分句型二）
Just now，my cousin，Xiaoming，who left home to Australia for his further study last year，informed me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family．（高分句型三）You know，we haven't seen each other for nearly a year．
I sincerely hope you can accept my apology．Shanghai is a place worth visiting，so I'd like to make another date with you to go there together．Once again，I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused．
Yours，
Li Hua．

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息 假設你是華夏中學的學生李華．你和在鄭州上學的英國朋友Tom約好下周末去上海旅游，但你因故不能赴約．請你根據(jù)以下要點用英語給他寫一封電子郵件，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：表示歉意；解釋原因；另約時間 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：further study （進一步學習/深造），informed sb that（通知某人…），pick sb up （用車接某人），accept my appreciate（接受謝意），make another date （另外約定），show sb around （帶領(lǐng)某人參觀），inconvenience（不方便）
I am really sorry to tell you that I can't go to Shanghai with you next weekend，which I have promised．（高分句型一）
I apologize for it and want you to know what happened．（高分句型二）
Just now，my cousin，Xiaoming，who left home to Australia for his further study last year，informed me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
      I am really sorry to tell you that I can't go to Shanghai with you next weekend，which I have promised．（高分句型一）I apologize for it and want you to know what happened．（高分句型二）
      Just now，my cousin，Xiaoming，who left home to Australia for his further study last year，informed me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family．（高分句型三）You know，we haven't seen each other for nearly a year．
      I sincerely hope you can accept my apology．Shanghai is a place worth visiting，so I'd like to make another date with you to go there together．Once again，I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused．
                                                                
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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