Question

15．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文．短文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在此符號(hào)下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞的下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
     2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)．
    There is nothing I like more than reading．I like different forms of literature-novel，short stories and so on．I like to read whatever I have a bit of quiet time--like early in the morning，during lunch hour，and at night when I'm lying in the bed．I usually read in a small study next to his living room．It's like a small library with good natural sunlight．I really don't enjoy reading in coffee shops or public places．I need quiet space to read．Besidc books，I often skim through magazines and newspapers，and I am fond of do the puzzles．They are fun and interesting．I collect articles from newspapers for useful information or recipes．For me，reading was a spiritual experience that gives me great person satisfaction．Television and movies can't do that．I can't think about any better way to relax and forget the pressure of each day．

Answer 1

分析 本文作者主要介紹了自己最大的愛(ài)好---閱讀．只要有一點(diǎn)空閑的時(shí)間，他就會(huì)去看各種形式的文學(xué)小說(shuō)，短篇故事等，也經(jīng)常地瀏覽報(bào)紙和雜志，作者認(rèn)為閱讀是一種給了他極大自我滿足感的精神體驗(yàn)，它是使自己得到放松并忘記每一天壓力的最好的方式．

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1．將novel改為novels   考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)  此處指不同形式的文學(xué)小說(shuō)，并不僅僅指一本或一種小說(shuō)；故用名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式 
2．將whatever改為whenever  考查連詞的用法   根據(jù)句意可知，此處在句中作時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，意為：無(wú)論什么時(shí)候，只要我有一點(diǎn)安靜的時(shí)間，我都喜歡閱讀，故用whenever
3．去掉the    考查固定短語(yǔ)的用法    固定短語(yǔ)lie in bed意為：躺在床上；故去掉the
4．將his改為my   考查人稱的一致性   根據(jù)句意"我通常在緊挨著（我的）客廳的小書(shū)房里看書(shū)"可知，主語(yǔ)I對(duì)應(yīng)的形容詞性的物主代詞應(yīng)是my，指"我的客廳"；故用my
5．public前加other   考查形容詞的用法   由于"coffee shops咖啡館"也屬于公共場(chǎng)所，故此處應(yīng)將其排除在外；本句的意思應(yīng)是：我真的不喜歡在咖啡館或其他的公共場(chǎng)所看書(shū)；所以應(yīng)在public前加other"其他的"
6．將Beside改為Besides   考查介詞的用法區(qū)別     介詞beside"在…旁邊"；besides"除了…之外"；本句的意思是：除了看書(shū)之外，我經(jīng)常瀏覽報(bào)紙和雜志；故用Besides
7．將do改為doing      考查動(dòng)名詞的用法     由于此處用在介詞of 之后作賓語(yǔ)，故用動(dòng)名詞形式doing
8．將was改為is      考查時(shí)態(tài)  由于本文主要介紹了作者喜歡閱讀，并且使用的都是一般過(guò)去時(shí)；此處表達(dá)的是作者對(duì)閱讀的看法，即閱讀是一種精神體驗(yàn)，故用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；由于主語(yǔ)是動(dòng)名詞reading，故用is
9．將person改為personal   考查形容詞的用法    此處用來(lái)修飾名詞 satisfaction；意為：自我滿足；故用形容詞personal 
10．將about改為of     考查固定短語(yǔ)的用法    固定短語(yǔ)think of 記起，想起；think about 考慮；本句的意思是：我想不起任何更好的方法來(lái)放松和忘記每一天的壓力；故用of

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)是集語(yǔ)法知識(shí)與語(yǔ)言技能為一體的綜合性試題，主要考查學(xué)生對(duì)詞匯、語(yǔ)法和語(yǔ)篇三要素的把握能力．錯(cuò)誤類型一般有：缺詞、多詞和錯(cuò)詞．常見(jiàn)的錯(cuò)誤有：1 詞法錯(cuò)誤，主要包括動(dòng)詞、名詞、冠詞、形容詞、副詞、代詞和介詞等詞類誤用、同義詞混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此類試題時(shí)，需要正確分析句子成分，熟練掌握各詞類的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常見(jiàn)句法錯(cuò)誤．通常表現(xiàn)為簡(jiǎn)單句、復(fù)合句以及疑問(wèn)句、祈使句、感嘆句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句等錯(cuò)誤．解答此類試題時(shí)，需要掌握各類句子的句式結(jié)構(gòu)及意義用法．3 應(yīng)在理解文章大意的前提下，進(jìn)行作答．