Question

1．生活中．你自己或他人曾有過物品不慎丟失而又找回的經(jīng)歷，其間有煩惱、有驚喜、有感慨…請(qǐng)就此寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文．
主要內(nèi)容包括，1）丟失的物品：2）物品失而復(fù)得的經(jīng)過； 3）你的感想．
注意：
Ⅰ．詞數(shù)不少于120個(gè)；
Ⅱ．不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．要求根據(jù)所提供信息寫一篇短文．要點(diǎn)包括：丟失的物品；物品失而復(fù)得的經(jīng)過；你的感想．可見文章的中心和重點(diǎn)要放在"經(jīng)過"的描寫之中，但是也要描寫自己的感受，寫出作者自己的煩惱、驚喜、感慨；尤其要包含失而復(fù)得的復(fù)雜過程，是一篇夾敘夾議的作文．寫作時(shí)應(yīng)以過去時(shí)為主．人稱以第一人稱為主．重要短語(yǔ)：made a call （打電話），as usual（如通常一樣），be absent-minded（心不在焉），take trouble to do（不辭辛勞地做某事），It turned out that （結(jié)果是，證明是），remind sb to do （提醒某人做某事）．

解答 One possible version：
Oh，my God!Where is my iPhone？I made a call just now on the bus．Suddenly I remembered I've put it on the seat next to me．It's my birthday present from my father．He would be sad if he knew it．（丟失的物品）
  I go to school as usual this morning，trying to stay calm．【高分句型】The first two classes ended quickly because I was absent-minded．During the break，my math teacher asked me to visit him．I am very uneasy because I didn't know what I had done wrong．Seeing me standing there，my teacher showed me my iPhone．【高分句型】Overjoyed，I grasped it back quickly．It turned out that the driver of the bus that I often take saw the picture of me in my iPhone and knew that I was a student of×××school．（物品失而復(fù)得的經(jīng)過）
I am very moved that the driver took so much trouble to send it to my school．The event will always remind me to be kind and helpful．（感想）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．