6．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào) （∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
This afternoon，we hold a class meeting to say goodbye to Zhang Qiang，who was going to study in abroad．In the beginning，he made a briefly speech to express his true love for the class and his wish for everlasting friendship with us．We were all moved to tear．Then came the moment to present him with a special gift，a heart-shaped board with some photos recorded the unforgettable days when we had spent together．Afterwards，we signed out names on his T-shirt expressing his best wishes．
At last，we had a photo taking to record this precious moment．True friendship won't be weakening by distance．We'll surely miss him and we all wish good luck in the future．

分析 文章講述了一次送別班會(huì)．一位叫張強(qiáng)的同學(xué)要出國，同學(xué)們紛紛表達(dá)了他們之間的友情，都紛紛留下了感動(dòng)的淚水．同學(xué)們送了一份特殊的禮物，一張心形的板上貼上了記錄他們在一起時(shí)光的照片．在T恤上簽名祝愿．他們相信真正的友誼不會(huì)因?yàn)榫嚯x而變淡．

解答 This afternoon，we hold a class meeting to say goodbye to Zhang Qiang，
                             held
who was going to study in abroad．In the beginning，he made a briefly speech 
                                  去掉                                                      brief
to express his true love for the class and his wish for everlasting friendship with us．

We were all moved to tear．Then came the moment to present him with a special gift，
                                tears
a heart-shaped board with some photos recorded the unforgettable days when we had 
                                                          recording                               that/which
spent together．Afterwards，we signed out names on his T-shirt expressing his best wishes．
                                                                                                               our
At last，we had a photo taking to record this precious moment．
                                    taken
True friendship won't be weakening by distance．
                                    weakened
We'll surely miss him and we all wish∧good luck in the future．
                                                     加him
71．hold改為held．文章講述的是過去的事情，要用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)．  
72．刪掉in．a(chǎn)broad的是副詞，作study的狀語，不要介詞．     
73．briefly改為brief．speech是名詞，要用形容詞來修飾．
74．tear改為tears．短語搭配，be moved to tears感動(dòng)得流淚．  
75．recorded改為recording．record后接賓語，是主動(dòng)，要用現(xiàn)在分詞作photos的定語． 
76．when改為that/which．題干中we had spent together是修飾days的定語從句，從句中spent是及物動(dòng)詞，缺少賓語，要用關(guān)系代詞．
77．his改為our．邏輯錯(cuò)誤，題干指代的we，要用對應(yīng)的形容詞性物主代詞our．     
78．taking改為taken．題干中photo與take之間是動(dòng)賓關(guān)系，要用被動(dòng)的過去分詞，構(gòu)成have sth done結(jié)構(gòu)．      
79．weakening改為weakened．題干中friendship與weaken之間構(gòu)成動(dòng)賓關(guān)系，要用被動(dòng)語態(tài)．  
80．good前面加him．短語搭配，wish sb good luck祝愿某人好運(yùn)．

點(diǎn)評 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．�？嫉闹R(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．

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