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4．2014年全國(guó)發(fā)生數(shù)起嚴(yán)重的校園暴力事件，某中學(xué)高三8班圍繞校園安全問(wèn)題召開(kāi)主題班會(huì)．假定你是班長(zhǎng)李華，以"How to protect ourselves in campus violence"為標(biāo)題寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，主要包括如下內(nèi)容：
1．校園暴力事件已引起廣泛關(guān)注．
2．要求每個(gè)學(xué)生都學(xué)習(xí)相關(guān)知識(shí)，增強(qiáng)自身防范能力．
3．遇到校園暴力時(shí)要采取適當(dāng)措施，包括：保持冷靜，判斷清楚自己的處境和可能的危險(xiǎn)；盡一切可能避免人身傷害；及時(shí)報(bào)警．
注意：1．詞數(shù)120左右；開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
參考詞匯：增強(qiáng)-enhance
How to protect ourselves in campus violence
Dear friends，
This year，some seriously violent incidents happened in campus，resulting in very bad results．The incidents of campus violence have drawn wide spread attention in our country．
As a student，we should learn some knowledge about how to deal with the violence and enhance the ability of self-protection．

Of course，if we meet the violence，we should take appropriate measures to protect ourselves．At first，we'd better keep calm，judge the situation and beaware of the possible dangers．Then，we should try our best to escape or prevent the violence．At last but not least，we should call the police or teachers as soon as possible to avoid the physical injury．
That's all．Thank you．
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文，根據(jù)所提供的材料，寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿．以"How to protect ourselves in campus violence"為標(biāo)題．寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)包括：1．校園暴力事件已引起廣泛關(guān)注；2．要求每個(gè)學(xué)生都學(xué)習(xí)相關(guān)知識(shí)，增強(qiáng)自身防范能力；3．遇到校園暴力時(shí)要采取適當(dāng)措施，包括：保持冷靜，判斷清楚自己的處境和可能的危險(xiǎn)； 盡一切可能避免人身傷害；及時(shí)報(bào)警．寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．人稱(chēng)以第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)為主．重要短語(yǔ)：result in（導(dǎo)致），draw wide spread attention （引起廣泛關(guān)注），deal with（處理），enhance the ability of…（增強(qiáng)…的能力），take appropriate measures to（采取適當(dāng)?shù)拇胧�），keep calm （保持冷靜），try our best to do sth（努力做某事），be aware of（意識(shí)到）．

解答 How to protect ourselves in campus violence 
Dear friends，
This year，some seriously violent incidents happened in campus，resulting in very badresults．【高分句型】The incidents of campus violence have drawn widespreadattention in our country．（校園暴力已引起廣泛關(guān)注）
As a student，we should learn some knowledge about how to deal with the violence and enhancethe ability of self-protection．【高分句型】（要求每個(gè)學(xué)生都學(xué)習(xí)相關(guān)知識(shí)，增強(qiáng)自身防范能力）
Of course，if we meet the violence，we should take appropriate measures to protect ourselves．At first，we'd better keep calm，judge the situation and beaware of the possible dangers．Then，we should try our best to escape or prevent the violence．At last but not least，we should call the police orteachers as soon as possible to avoid the physical injury．（遇到校園暴力應(yīng)采取適當(dāng)措施）
   That's all．Thank you．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．