Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你校的聯(lián)誼學校——美國喬治中學要招聘一名學生外聯(lián)部長，主要負責與其聯(lián)系和接待等工作。條件是英語水平高，能熟練操作計算機，熱心為兩校服務。請你據(jù)此寫一封自薦信。

參考詞匯：外聯(lián)部長director of foreign liaison department

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100個左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I have learned that your school is in need of a director of foreign liaison department. I would like you to consider me for the position,

I have a good command of English. In the past two years, I have been an editor for the English Paper in my school. I am familiar with computer operation and office softwares, which can help me work well. What’s more, I am always ready to help others and offer good services. I think I am competent for the job. I would appreciate it if I could have the opportunity to get the job.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文是一封書信。假如你是李華，你校的聯(lián)誼學校——美國喬治中學要招聘一名學生外聯(lián)部長，主要負責與其聯(lián)系和接待等工作。條件是英語水平高，能熟練操作計算機，熱心為兩校服務。請你據(jù)此寫一封自薦信。寫作時要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所給要點，并以此為基礎充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來。寫作時注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用，同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點說明】本文是一封書信，格式正確，內容齊全，結構布局合理，文中使用高級句子。I have learned that your school is in need of a director of foreign liaison department.運用定語從句；In the past two years, I have been an editor for the English Paper in my school.運用現(xiàn)在完成時；增加文章的時態(tài)變化；I am familiar with computer operation and office softwares, which can help me work well.運用定語從句；同時運用很多連接詞如What's more等，I think I am competent for the job. I would appreciate it if I could have the opportunity to get the job.此句式為文章增色，顯得文章很有檔次。