Question

18．假設(shè)你是李華，Harry是你的美國(guó)筆友．在來(lái)信中談到華盛頓的國(guó)會(huì)圖書(shū)館．你常常去北京的中國(guó)國(guó)家圖書(shū)館．于是你回信向他介紹這個(gè)圖書(shū)館．
注意：
（1）信的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好；
（2）詞數(shù)不少于100．

位置面積	北京城西，紫竹院公園旁 24萬(wàn)平方米，地上19層，地下3層，世界第三
藏書(shū)規(guī)模	2200萬(wàn)冊(cè)，居亞洲之首
服務(wù)項(xiàng)目	圖書(shū)借閱；網(wǎng)上服務(wù)
使用觀感	設(shè)備先進(jìn)，服務(wù)優(yōu)質(zhì)；環(huán)境幽雅，令人享受

提示詞：設(shè)備facilities
Dear Harry，
How are things going with you？Talking about famous libraries，I would like to introduce to you about our National Library．
The library，with Zi Zhuyuan Park as its neighbor，is located in the west of Beijing．It covers an area of 240，000 square meters，with 19 stories above the ground，and 3 stories underground，ranking the third in the world．（高分句型一）The library has a total collection of over 22，000，000 copies of books，the largest number in Asia．It provides readers with spacious reading rooms，convenient online service and the latest web information．（高分句型二）Its grand building，modern facilities and good service will surely leave you a very deep impression．No.9 bus can pick me up from home and drop me right in front of the library，so I often go there to study or to borrow books．I enjoy the quiet and literary atmosphere in the library．
Hope you can visit it some day and I'm looking forward to your next letter．
Best wishes，
Yours，
Li Hu．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于圖表類作文，根據(jù)提示信息Harry是你的美國(guó)筆友．在來(lái)信中談到華盛頓的國(guó)會(huì)圖書(shū)館．你常常去北京的中國(guó)國(guó)家圖書(shū)館．于是你回信向他介紹這個(gè)圖書(shū)館，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：分別從地理位置、藏書(shū)規(guī)模、服務(wù)項(xiàng)目和使用觀感幾個(gè)方面來(lái)討論該話題 2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：be located in坐落于；leave sb a deep impression給某人留下深刻印象；pick up接，搭載；in front of 在…的前面；look forward to盼望；
It covers an area of 240，000 square meters，with 19 stories above the ground，and 3 stories underground，ranking the third in the world．（高分句型一）
It provides readers with spacious reading rooms，convenient online service and the latest web information．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear Harry，
      How are things going with you？Talking about famous libraries，I would like to introduce to you about our National Library．The library，with Zi Zhuyuan Park as its neighbor，is located in the west of Beijing．It covers an area of 240，000 square meters，with 19 stories above the ground，and 3 stories underground，ranking the third in the world．（高分句型一）The library has a total collection of over 22，000，000 copies of books，the largest number in Asia．It provides readers with spacious reading rooms，convenient online service and the latest web information．（高分句型二）Its grand building，modern facilities and good service will surely leave you a very deep impression．No.9 bus can pick me up from home and drop me right in front of the library，so I often go there to study or to borrow books．I enjoy the quiet and literary atmosphere in the library．
       Hope you can visit it some day and I'm looking forward to your next letter．
                                                                                                                                                                                            Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                            Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．