Question

19．如何理解"成功"，不同的人有不同的看法．請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的引語（ quotation），按要求用英語寫一篇短文．
"Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm．"
-Sir Winston，Churchill
內(nèi)容要求：
1）你對(duì)該引語的理解：
2）你的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷：
3）恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾．
注意：
1）短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)：
2）文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息：
3）詞數(shù)：120左右．
This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that     ．

Answer 1

分析 本文寫作話題是"成功"，根據(jù)所給材料"丘吉爾有關(guān)成功的名言"闡述觀點(diǎn)，發(fā)表看法，并結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，屬于提綱作文．在寫作時(shí)以第一人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)為主．重要短語：get discouraged （氣餒），consists in（在于），can't wait to（迫不及待地做…..），lost heart（氣餒，喪失信心），stick to（堅(jiān)持），look back（回顧），succeed in（成功做…）．

解答 This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn't get discouraged right after failures．Rather，we should keep trying with enthusiasm．Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures．（理解）
     At the age of twelve，I got a nice bike as a birthday gift．So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it．【高分句型】However，it was harder than expected．The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control．Worse still，I took many falls off the bike．I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going．【高分句型】With more practice，I did better and better．Looking back，I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike had I lost heart．【高分句型】（經(jīng)歷）
    Actually，we can't succeed in everything we try．What's important is that we should stick to it．【高分句型】（總結(jié)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．