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15．假定你是某中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，聽說某中外合作辦學(xué)大學(xué)招收廣東高中畢業(yè)生，有意申請到該校英語系學(xué)習(xí)．請根據(jù)信息，用英語寫一封自薦信．要點(diǎn)如下：
主要說明個(gè)人教育背景、興趣愛好和專長、選擇課程及理由
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭、結(jié)語已為你寫好．
假定你是某中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，聽說某中外合作辦學(xué)大學(xué)招收廣東高中畢業(yè)生，有意申請到該校英語系學(xué)習(xí)．請根據(jù)信息，用英語寫一封自薦信．要點(diǎn)如下：
主要說明個(gè)人教育背景、興趣愛好和專長、選擇課程及理由
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭、結(jié)語已為你寫好．
Dear Sir/Madame，
 I'm Lihua，a senior student who will graduate from Guangdong province this June． 
I am writing thisletter in purpose of applying for admission into the English Department in youresteemed university and I'm confident I will meet your both academic and language requirements．（高分句型一）
During the past three years in senior school，I have not only grasped the principal skills of all subjectsbut more importantly developed a strong interest in language and English culture．（高分句型二）My ability to write and speak English is out of questionso that there will be little problem in attending the courses given by foreign teachers．Besides，your university in"cross-cultural education"，especially the global community of international students as well as the academic staff from differentcountries，are of particular interest to me．That's why I seek entry to your university．
I will appreciate it very much if my application can be taken into considerationand lookforward to your reply．（高分句型三）
Yours sincerely
Lihua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是某中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，聽說某中外合作辦學(xué)大學(xué)招收廣東高中畢業(yè)生，有意申請到該校英語系學(xué)習(xí)．請根據(jù)信息，用英語寫一封自薦信．寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：主要說明個(gè)人教育背景、興趣愛好和專長、選擇課程及理由
    2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：apply for申請；not only，but （also）不僅，而且；out of question毫無疑問；Besides另外；as well as也，和；look  forward to 盼望；
I am writing this letter in purpose of applying for admission into the English Department in your esteemed university and I'm confident I will meet your both academic and language requirements．（高分句型一）
During the past three years in senior school，I have not only grasped the principal skills of all subjects but more importantly developed a strong interest in language and English culture．（高分句型二）
I will appreciate it very much if my application can be taken into consideration and look  forward to your reply．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir/Madame，
       I'm Lihua，a senior 3 student who will graduate from Guangdong province this june． I am writing this letter in purpose of applying for admission into the English Department in your esteemed university and I'm confident I will meet your both academic and language requirements．（高分句型一）
      During the past three years in senior school，I have not only grasped the principal skills of all subjects but more importantly developed a strong interest in language and English culture．（高分句型二）My ability to write and speak English is out of question so that there will be little problem in attending the courses given by foreign teachers．Besides，your university in"cross-cultural education"，especially  the global community of international students as well as the academic staff from different countries，are of particular interest to me．That's why I seek entry to your university．
       I will appreciate it very much if my application can be taken into consideration and look  forward to your reply．（高分句型三）
                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．