Question

假如你是李明，你跟你的朋友Paul聊天，他表示學(xué)習(xí)壓力(stress)很大，請你給他寫封信，給他提一些建議。

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1．將自己的問題告訴老師和同學(xué)，請求得到他們的幫助。

2．不要總想著考試成績，要多想想自己在哪些方面進(jìn)步了，這樣就會給自己自信(confidence)。

3．多做運動，運動可以幫助自己緩解壓力，并且有助于睡眠。

4．你對他的祝福。

【寫作要求】

信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，要求句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

Dear Paul,

I feel sorry for you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Paul,

I feel sorry for you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from. First of all, I suggest that you should share your trouble with your teachers and classmates so as to get help from them. Secondly, you are not supposed to think about your exams all the time, which only makes you more stressed out. Instead, you should think about the progress you have made in your study, which will surely increase your own confidence. In addition, I advise you to do more exercise in your spare time to relieve your stress, because sports will also help you sleep better at night.

I hope you will get out of your trouble sooner and live happily.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇建議信，文章的要點基本上都給了出來，考生只需要翻譯即可，難度不大，在寫作的時候要運用合適的連接詞把要點串聯(lián)起來，選擇詞匯的時候要選擇相對高級的詞匯，也要運用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。注意改變文章的樣式。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現(xiàn)同樣的目的。要使用合適的連接詞來連接各要點，使文章成為一個整體。

考點：考查建議信作文

點評：建議信作文的關(guān)鍵在于表達(dá)方式的選擇和要點的完備，不能有遺漏或者省略。提出建議要切實可行，要符合英語習(xí)慣，所以在寫作的時候要變換句式，要寫得更為親切直白。